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From the Fields of Grief

war-torn... i return to where your face aglow doth dim the dawning sun © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Date: 5/2/2022 10:02:00 PM
From war field, returning to the loved one is so exciting ! Great Monoku harry !
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Date: 9/27/2021 1:22:00 AM
Has an 'olden' tang Harry,neat
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Date: 5/9/2021 4:25:00 AM
Beautiful and sentimental , Harry.
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Date: 5/9/2021 3:04:00 AM
Touching and romantic, Harry. Nothing beats returning home to a special loved one! Best regards // paul
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Date: 5/9/2021 12:10:00 AM
I hope being reunited can heal his wounds. I appreciate this heartfelt piece Harry.
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Date: 5/6/2021 7:32:00 PM
Stunning...thank you
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Date: 5/6/2021 10:28:00 AM
Love this Harry. It gave me a mental picture of a soldier returning home to those who love him/her having given their all to protect and serve their country. Super write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/6/2021 6:34:00 AM
- Lovely line, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/6/2021 5:47:00 AM
Charming. I admire. Blessing.
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Date: 5/4/2021 4:55:00 PM
So much feeling and joyful emotion in this awesome monoku. Nice work, Harry. :D
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Date: 5/4/2021 12:26:00 PM
This is so nice Harry. Excellent :)
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Date: 5/4/2021 7:27:00 AM
Awww that's beautiful, Harry ~
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Date: 5/4/2021 3:55:00 AM
WoW! Harry, What a touching and felt one-liner a soldier returning to his beloved. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/4/2021 3:42:00 AM
A great Haiku Harry... May you find peace there
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Date: 5/3/2021 6:52:00 PM
Ah we always return to the brightest spot of our lives Harry, well done.
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Date: 5/3/2021 2:49:00 PM
wow, Now THIS is good stuff, my friend!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/6/2021 2:41:00 PM
what do most of them know anyway??
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Harry Horsman
Date: 5/3/2021 11:24:00 PM
Thank Andrea. the contest sponsor didn't think so.
Date: 5/3/2021 6:48:00 AM
Hi - Lovely poetry with quiet thoughts and reflections and soft quiet voice to match. May this day find you well. Thank you for sharing.
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Date: 5/3/2021 4:13:00 AM
Such is love and grief for our fellow man. Especially awful wartime. God bless you, Harry. Wonderful monoku.
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Date: 5/2/2021 6:45:00 AM
War: man's hobby.
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Date: 5/2/2021 5:18:00 AM
You silver tongued devil. LOL I really like this one Harry. Good luck!
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Date: 5/2/2021 4:49:00 AM
Wow~~ I like this one. Romantic work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Reads like a good contender in the contest. Sara
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Date: 5/2/2021 3:06:00 AM
Simply superb Harry.
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Date: 5/2/2021 1:08:00 AM
indeed, the sun too conspires ~ with what pure, loving hearts aspire
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