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From the Ashes

Can I escape from my own imbedded think Rapidly warped perception is the liquid I drink What Jesus is saying I discard with a blink My mind bent morality displacing Biblical ink The collapse of my synapses interlinked and exhausted with too many strange thoughts my mixed mind is accosted So sinking six feet a shrivelled seed potted Mildewed dusty dirty in the burnt soil rotted I rise from the ashes Escape from my dry Soul, body, mind, reconstitution on the wind I now fly Embracing this new freedom Knowing why my old self had to die Perspective changes everything when viewed from on high For God’s ways are different He speaks in whispers not a shout Trusting in His wisdom removes every doubt Within this mortal heart I can feel His Spirit sprout Who I wished to be before is no longer what I’m about. Written May 12, 2020 Richard J. Lamoureux

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Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/27/2020 6:45:00 AM

Hi Richard, another amazing write from your golden pen. This piece has such a wonderful flow and message. A gentle power that makes the heart feel the words. You have such an awesome gift. Have a wonderful Monday. Blessings....Mike.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/27/2020 6:56:00 AM

Thanks again Mike. Blessings Rick.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/15/2020 4:06:00 PM

The true experience of a battle to do good which comes with lots of distraction from bad. Bad is enticing, bad comes with lots of lust, bad seems irresistible, bad is common, bad is trending, bad is dope. But your last verse says it all... We still have salvation in Christ and with the new creation that we are, we can always rely of god to overcome, because truy 'He that thinks can stand should take heed, lest he fall." I not only enjoy this wonderful piece, I'm blessed as well. Welldone Ric.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/27/2020 6:57:00 AM

Well expressed Funom.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 6/7/2020 1:39:00 PM

Fine word of testimony Richard, nice rhyme and flow too. Truly blessed read. Blessings always,Gordon

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/7/2020 2:07:00 PM

Thanks Gordon. ;0)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2020 2:57:00 AM

this is very strong Richard, I like the freedom you describe. But, the ending is what I enjoyed the most. Always a pleasure to read. Linda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2020 11:14:00 AM

Thanks Linda. Hugs Rick.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/2/2020 9:49:00 AM

Another fine write Rick, when the Biblical ink is displaced there is bound to be trouble. Hey Rick I saw a movie on Youtube called Beauty in the broken, was a great movie focusing on the beauty in every broken person highlighting the plight of the homeless, reminded me of you. I'm sure you will like it, gotta excuse the profanity though!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2020 11:14:00 AM

Thanks John. ;0)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/22/2020 10:47:00 AM

A great deal of food for thought in this poem Rick - you 2nd last verse is awesome, it transported me for a few seconds to what and how you describe - Rising from the Ashes' - an excellent write -Blessings, Jennifer.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/22/2020 12:35:00 PM

Hi Jennifer, thanks for your thoughtful comment. Hugs Rick

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/19/2020 2:16:00 AM

Hi Richard, wow as usual you bring the best thought minded poetry to soup and us all..As for me, i believe in Jesus Christ, fervourly, i truly do, but not the majority of the human race. Time is the video, which keeps on replaying, era after era!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/22/2020 12:34:00 PM

Thanks my friend. You are very generous.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/18/2020 12:27:00 PM

Displacing Biblical ink ... I guess that's where that trouble typically starts. Instead of following God, following our own heart. You have some soul-stirring thoughts here.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/22/2020 12:27:00 PM

If God resides within our hearts, then to follow ones heart would be wise. Thanks for commenting Timothy.

Silent One

Date: 5/17/2020 9:16:00 PM

I think its important to be op n minded and one of the things with religion for some and this is all religions, it prevents open mindedness .. even within their own beliefs there are struggles.. You always write thought provoking poetry ..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/22/2020 12:25:00 PM

So let me understand, so to be opened minded one needs to believe in nothing?

Grace Daub

Date: 5/17/2020 4:26:00 PM

Wow, so true! The conflict between our human nature and God's nature is so real. very well done!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2020 4:48:00 PM

Thanks again Grace. Hugs Rick. I’m glad you are enjoying posting your poems.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 5/17/2020 6:12:00 AM

A very worthy reminder ...Take care, Kai

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2020 7:34:00 AM

Thanks Kai.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/16/2020 7:55:00 PM

This glorious tribute honors the tribunal in a beautifully well penned missive Richard.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/17/2020 7:35:00 AM

Thanks Karen. ;0)

Anil Deo

Date: 5/16/2020 12:40:00 PM

Final stanza is a great summary TESITMONY, of your openness to the Spirit of God leading ... Thanx for asking about shalom - from my post comment: Shalom, is so rich - connected with Jerusalem - SALEM also PEACE). When Jews greet "shalom, shalom" it's out of this world. 1X to rebuke evil; second SHALOM: is the BLESSING. Not just peace, but "WHOLEness, which is a trinity of peace, healing, and well-being. That's what my dear Sister Jen is talking about. Hallelujah; thanX

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2020 5:34:00 PM

Thanks Anil, well explained.

Michael Tor

Date: 5/16/2020 2:44:00 AM

Great acknowledgement Richard. Im so glad for you.... Nicely written.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2020 8:05:00 AM

Thanks a Michael.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/15/2020 4:21:00 PM

You used so many eloquent words in this poem, Richard. Amazing writing. The ending was just right!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/16/2020 8:05:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, hugs Rick.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/14/2020 10:03:00 PM

Amen. Time spend with the lord is time well spent for by beholding we are changed. Lovely....as usual

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2020 8:44:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/14/2020 9:44:00 PM

Bravo! Best reborn/resurrection write ever! Here's the reformed You! Best always, Gershon

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2020 8:39:00 AM

Thanks Gershon, much appreciated.

David Mchattie

Date: 5/14/2020 7:58:00 PM

The hardest part of any journey is to start the journey. Once you're on the path, it's like the flow of a river, Just let it carry you along. Wonderful write my friend. Have a great day. it

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/15/2020 8:39:00 AM

Well said David. ;0)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/14/2020 2:39:00 AM

Wow Rick, this is a profound view into a changed man. "Perspective changes everything when viewed from on high" changed for the better! La bella vita. I loved this Rick! xxoo

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/14/2020 7:06:00 AM

Thanks Connie. This piece came about after a conversation with my men’s group. ;0)

Roger Horsch

Date: 5/13/2020 10:59:00 AM

This my friend is a well written poem. I love to read poems like this one. With our Lord Jesus in your heart it almost writes itself. Keep up the good work Richard. Your friend ...Roger

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2020 11:44:00 AM

Much appreciated Robert. Blessings Rick.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/12/2020 8:36:00 PM

Hello Richard … a rethink on how one lives life. When this pandemic is over I wonder how many people will relate to your fine verse - thank you Richard - Lindsay

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2020 11:44:00 AM

Thanks Lindsay. ;0)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/12/2020 5:33:00 PM

Rising from the ashes like the phoenix, reborn again to be someone better. Well written verse Richard. Hope you're well Tom

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/12/2020 6:33:00 PM

Yes, I am well. Thanks for asking Tom. I hope this note finds you well.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 5/12/2020 1:37:00 PM

Palpable angst on the way in and spiritually uplifting on the way out, um, scratch that, the way up. Excellent piece! xomo

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/12/2020 6:34:00 PM

I see you changed your name. I’m curious, why the change.