From On High

red upon the blue the kite takes an overview nature re-cycles

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Jane Bowen

Date: 4/4/2009 7:40:00 PM

Perfectly original! Love the subject in the sky! A fun thought and great haiku!! Jane

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 3/25/2009 9:18:00 PM

Interesting version of the haiku. I've never seen it before. Thanks for your comment Brian.

Chris Goombi

Date: 3/25/2009 1:54:00 AM

Nice perspective.

Abe Lopez

Date: 3/23/2009 5:56:00 PM

Nice overview, nice haiku

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/23/2009 5:51:00 PM

I love this lovely form. Your imagery is brilliant in this, Brian! Love, Robin

Jim Wilson

Date: 3/23/2009 3:13:00 PM

This is a fun image. Very enjoyable.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/23/2009 2:34:00 PM

I thought you meant the bird at first - how wonderful it works for both! Truly brilliant! Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/23/2009 8:36:00 AM

It is kite weather here too!! Such fun with out grandchildren....we fly them in the pasture across from our home. Love this poem! ~ Carrie