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From Mystical Hills

dreams wander from mystical hills soft emerald rainbow clouds float I touch them …embrace them…hold them never let them abandon me ~ dreams from the deep sapphire ocean come rolling in tumultuous waves, I cradle them close...my soul euphoric, ecstatic, elated ~ drizzles of rain, bird-melodies… chants from temples, serene seaside.. my whole body shivers in awe, dreams live for ever crystallized ~ love carries crimson dreams to eyes Darling, whisper me words I dote want to hear ~ again and again ~ don't want night to be over soon... March 31, 2022 L - Lay Form - New - Poetry contest Sponsor: Constance La France Syllables (8 in every line) checked by HMS.com Theme: Dreams SECOND PLACE

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Date: 4/8/2022 1:31:00 PM
Mala, congratulations on your win in my Lay Contest with your wonderful poem ~Constance
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Date: 4/7/2022 4:43:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/7/2022 5:06:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. Appreciate your encouraging comment.
Date: 4/4/2022 6:31:00 AM
Intense experience of nature. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/7/2022 5:05:00 PM
Thanks, Christuraj. Appreciate your inspiring comment.
Date: 3/31/2022 6:29:00 PM
I feel serenity in every line. Such a marvellous rendition of sublime feelings unsaid for a long long time. All the best in the contest.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/31/2022 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Dear JCB. really appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 3/31/2022 5:25:00 PM
A lovely poem; loved the images you portray so exquisitely, Mala. Best of luck in the contest.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/31/2022 5:55:00 PM
Thanks, Milton. Appreciate your inspiring comments.

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