From My Diary: Sadness

Whenever grief rushes to pierce sighs Before night slowly lays itself down; Trickles of drafts and verses ripple On a white sheet as morn presses Into rows and rows of lines, igniting my fingers To etch lonely evenings, undefined: this head Bows wired in a ruptured place that needs A voice, a cry which moistens dim of eyes : Then, lingering beneath a wave of stars I heave over twilight's passage until Gentler hours drift where ink bleeds vignettes, Imbuing a language of hope that only A canvas of words could speak on my behalf : For in those brief glimpses the quill sparks, Unable to be chained by a fire of expression. Laura Loo's Any Poem Won in a Contest in November (not from mine) Originally Written 11/2/2017 Contest: Enter A Poem Called, From My Diary Theme: Sadness Re-submitted 12/4/2017
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Ashley Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 7:44 PM
Congratulations Nette on your excellent win with your artistic and beautifully sad poem.
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 5:24 PM
Congratulations, Nette, a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
Scars Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:36 AM
deep and profound poem! loved it sweet Nette...thank you and congrats :)
Michaels Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 4:45 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sombre piece! Regards, John.
Delaney Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 7:06 PM
Congratulations on your lovely sharing write. Hugs, SuZ
Krampe Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette. Love your imagery.
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 4:29 PM
This is lovely Nette! Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )
La France Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 12:03 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad page from you diary, I too use my sadness and dreams to create words, well done.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 7:54 AM
You make sad so pretty. Congrats and a hug.
Wigley Avatar
November 8, 2017 at 12:55 AM
This is lovely, nette, a beautiful piece. Well done. Viv x
Sivey Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Oh Nette, your expression here is truly on fire, such passion in every word you use, and filled with an awe of superiority through your words of complete wisdom! I loved your delightful poem here, so filled with a lovely piece of ignitable power, an amazing cry to the powers that be! I loved this wondrous piece my friend, I will always be in awe of your remarkable poetry! Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 2:15 AM
- ... tomorrow comes a new day ... - This is beautiful even in sadness, Nette - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Paras Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 7:02 PM
How glorious to experience you in sorrow and gladness of hope! Indeed a woman of substance and a poet of the times.
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:33 PM
a beautiful example of free verse, Nette. You do it so well!
Pandit Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 4:40 PM
Emotions well depicted in this artful sad poem--well written, nette--best for a win!
Tacito Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 3:53 PM
A journey through pain, melancholy & discovery. Being able to feel like our words & feelings can still mean something in the end. Powerful. You've been missed.
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November 1, 2017 at 2:33 PM
A gorgeous expressive penning Nette, my best to you in the contest xomo
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