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From My Diary: Sadness

Whenever grief rushes to pierce sighs Before night slowly lays itself down; Trickles of drafts and verses ripple On a white sheet as morn presses Into rows and rows of lines, igniting my fingers To etch lonely evenings, undefined: this head Bows wired in a ruptured place that needs A voice, a cry which moistens dim of eyes : Then, lingering beneath a wave of stars I heave over twilight's passage until Gentler hours drift where ink bleeds vignettes, Imbuing a language of hope that only A canvas of words could speak on my behalf : For in those brief glimpses the quill sparks, Unable to be chained by a fire of expression. Laura Loo's Any Poem Won in a Contest in November (not from mine) Originally Written 11/2/2017 Contest: Enter A Poem Called, From My Diary Theme: Sadness Re-submitted 12/4/2017

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Date: 12/4/2017 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your excellent win with your artistic and beautifully sad poem.
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Date: 12/4/2017 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations, Nette, a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 12/4/2017 6:36:00 AM
deep and profound poem! loved it sweet Nette...thank you and congrats :)
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Date: 11/10/2017 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this sombre piece! Regards, John.
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Date: 11/8/2017 7:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely sharing write. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:18:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette. Love your imagery.
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Date: 11/8/2017 4:29:00 PM
This is lovely Nette! Congratulations on your wonderful second placement! : )
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Date: 11/8/2017 12:03:00 PM
Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this sad page from you diary, I too use my sadness and dreams to create words, well done.
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Date: 11/8/2017 7:54:00 AM
You make sad so pretty. Congrats and a hug.
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Date: 11/8/2017 12:55:00 AM
This is lovely, nette, a beautiful piece. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 11/2/2017 5:49:00 AM
Oh Nette, your expression here is truly on fire, such passion in every word you use, and filled with an awe of superiority through your words of complete wisdom! I loved your delightful poem here, so filled with a lovely piece of ignitable power, an amazing cry to the powers that be! I loved this wondrous piece my friend, I will always be in awe of your remarkable poetry! Great Work!!
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Date: 11/2/2017 2:15:00 AM
- ... tomorrow comes a new day ... - This is beautiful even in sadness, Nette - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2017 7:02:00 PM
How glorious to experience you in sorrow and gladness of hope! Indeed a woman of substance and a poet of the times.
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Date: 11/1/2017 5:33:00 PM
a beautiful example of free verse, Nette. You do it so well!
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Date: 11/1/2017 4:40:00 PM
Emotions well depicted in this artful sad poem--well written, nette--best for a win!
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Date: 11/1/2017 3:53:00 PM
A journey through pain, melancholy & discovery. Being able to feel like our words & feelings can still mean something in the end. Powerful. You've been missed.
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Date: 11/1/2017 2:33:00 PM
A gorgeous expressive penning Nette, my best to you in the contest xomo
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