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Frigid Waterfall (Haiku)

frigid waterfall. . . crystal tears from fallen limbs a woodland wonder For Raul Moreno's "Icy Cascade" contest

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Paul Callus

Date: 9/11/2016 4:37:00 PM

I love your frigid waterfall, Connie, especially the 2nd line...very poetic. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/16/2016 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I adore haiku but don't write it much anymore. : )

Kash Poet

Date: 9/9/2011 4:03:00 PM

An excellent haiku here Connie...enjoyed.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/8/2010 2:32:00 PM

Yes Matthew, it won the number 9 spot and I was really pleased. There were some awesome entries so I felt really honored to be amongst the winners.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/8/2010 12:22:00 PM

Congratulations on this haiku. Makes the perfect woods look lovely when you put it that way,..p.d.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/2/2010 8:01:00 PM

I like line 2 best! HUGS!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/5/2010 9:28:00 PM

Beautiful haiku. Did you win the contest? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:42:00 PM

wow, connie, very pretty. I am so happy to see you on the winners' list! Luv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 9:51:00 AM

Awesome #9 Connie. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Thomas Kurdyla

Date: 3/4/2010 9:49:00 AM

Connie, beautifully penned! A truly great Haiku! Congrats! Tom

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:42:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Connie! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 3/3/2010 7:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:12:00 PM

yes indeed - a nice one here, Connie. Congratulations to you and thank you for your comments!-Robert

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 3/3/2010 12:54:00 PM

Connie! Thank you for your comment on my poem in Raul's contest your to kind! Congratulations goes to you as well I love your second line! Love Laura :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2010 12:24:00 PM

Ah, what a beauty, Connie! My warm congratulations to you on your win! Enjoy it! Peace, Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:31:00 AM

Connie, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/3/2010 9:38:00 AM

nice very nice..congrad's!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 8:53:00 AM

lovely descriptive words. Congratulations. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 5:33:00 AM

A big congrats Connie on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. I knew the first time I read it ..it was surely a winner ..so now enjoy this wonderful moment and victorious win..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Connie. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:40:00 AM

Connie, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/1/2010 3:40:00 AM

your second line evokes so much emotion--really liked this Connie, I wish you the best in the contest and I hope everything's doing good with you :) thanks for all your comments on my poems :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/28/2010 1:21:00 PM

Very pretty poetic Haiku, Connie. Good fortune to you. -Robert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2010 9:10:00 PM

WOW Connie ..a magnificent entry for Raul's contest.. a superbly descriptive Haiku .. good luck in the contest.. a treasure .. luv.. Linda-Marie..