Friends

Northern Ireland In 69,On the firs day,It seemed just fine,On day two,We all awoke,This second day,It was no joke,Outside we came,Onto the  Shankhhill Road,Shields And Batons,Rifles to load,Thousands of people,In an uproar,That was the,First day we sore,How some in Ireland,Were  friends no more,WE stood there,All in rows,As  Missiles and Bricks,Bounced off our toes,The first rank opened,And out we went,Batons ready,In the crowd,We were sent,Soon petrol bombs,Came  at us,Our clothes set alight,But this,Never stopped us,To continue the  fight,Many were  injured,Some did not return,And in my mind,These images still burn,Lets not forget,This terrible time,These were Brothers,Friends of mine,Spare A thought,Not just for those,But the soldiers,Still suffering,Who still live,With these woes,PTSD Is all around,I still jump,At the slightest sound,This weekend  will be,So hard for me,And many Brothers,And sisters will see,The horrors they encountered,They will live again,So spare A thought,For those in pain,
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December 22, 2016 at 5:09 PM
good job!!!!! congrats on being featured+++++++++++++++
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December 22, 2016 at 9:11 AM
A deep, emotional piece.... I'm glad that your piece was featured in the Poetrysoup homepage, John!! ;-)
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November 12, 2016 at 7:27 AM
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