Fred the Martian

There was a Martian, whose name was Fred.
Who had a Venusian girlfriend, who said?
Fred is a ghastly lover.
He will only hover.
He has no feet or hair on his head.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 23, 2010 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations Cecil, on your win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. Smiles, Dane Ann
White Avatar
March 22, 2010 at 8:07 AM
HaHa I love the Venusian girlfriend part Congrats
Freeman Avatar
March 21, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations Cecil on your win. Agape, Moses
Dufresne Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 10:25 AM
funnyu and ghastly -- guess that';s why I like it Congrats to you Cecil.!
Villarosa Avatar
March 20, 2010 at 1:41 AM
Creative write and congratulations on your well-deserved win, Cecil. (^_^) Noel.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 7:21 PM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem and placement in the Limerick contest.. a wonderful win for u to so enjoy for a terrific write.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 5:14 PM
Wonder what his girlfriend looks like? Very funny. Congratulations. Joyce
Fraser Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations Cecil on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
Devonshire Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 10:27 AM
A lover who only "hovers" would drive me crazy, Cecil. Great poem! Congrats on your success in my contest. Love, Carolyn
Delacroix Avatar
March 17, 2010 at 11:10 PM
Cute and funny limerick. True to its form. Very well written, Cecil. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 5:59 PM
hahaha, just the necessary silliness to make it a great limerick! Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea
Murphy Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 9:40 AM
funny hope for contest if so good luck nice one faleshia
Palli Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 12:37 AM
so silly, I chuckled
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