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An Independence Day memory fragment - my husband and I along with our daughter and her small family have just set up our lawn chairs and blankets for the little ones along the crowded avenue from which we’ll view the parade. As the big event gets underway, we realize to our dismay the sun shines directly into our eyes making it difficult to see, but it’s too late to move to another spot. The sun beats down; I feel unexpectedly exhausted as my grandson gleefully shouts: Grandma, look at this! Grandma, look at that! A float like I’ve seen a dozen times before passes by my heavy eyes. . . The sun caresses my face so warmly, no other time have I felt so relaxed or so removed from everything around me in the midst of such a large mass of people. Knowing I should show interest for the grandkids, I still keep sinking into sweet oblivion while the world simply fades away. . . Written Sept. 10, 2013 for the Fragment Poetry Contest of Broken Wings
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Maverick Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 2:33 PM
Lots of inferrance here I see Andrea, the attention holding family... The great efforts that go into the occasion, 'the sun' that maybe is the reality check..? against that garish illusion about to focus crowd awareness..' a bit like the elections i suppose..'
Horsman Avatar
October 24, 2013 at 4:58 PM
lovely experience, lovely poetry,,
Babcock Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 4:26 PM
I can relate to this poem. The kids sure love to watch a parade. Took the girls and now will be time to take the boys. Wish the kids would have had kids 10 years ago when i had more energy. LOL love phyl
Ainsley Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 8:20 AM
Been there for the children myself;It's worth it for their bright eyes and smiles. Life takes that wonder of things away to soon!
Jackson Avatar
October 14, 2013 at 3:04 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem. It was lovely and "the world simply fades away" was brilliant. Best wishes Linda x
Seal Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Aww, they should move Independence Day to January, that's January 2095 lol, yes those floats zzzzzzz, bin there Petal haha. Congratulations on the win. Take care, Richard
Cavanaugh Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 10:55 AM
My kind of relaxing day.
A  Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 10:13 PM
always enjoying your poems . Love ~SKAT~
George   Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Such a beautiful memory, Andrea. Lainie
Dey Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 7:40 AM
Great winning work....congratulation!
A   Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 10:15 PM
nice winning poem...LINDA
Austin Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 9:21 AM
Another world. I recall the Independence Day parade with the sun shining off soldiers silver helmets and the bass drum pounding in my little chest. Good thoughts. Love, daver
Morgan Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 7:31 PM
I was laughing myself i get your point very clear Congrats on your win. Morgan
Lanre Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Congrats! Hmn...GL
Minardi Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 8:00 AM
a beautiful life can be.. congrats on the win, Andrea :)
Guzzi Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:01 PM
Lucky to be a Grandma! ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dillard Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 8:54 AM
The sun is beaming in the east window of my study at this very moment, making me squint to see the screen with only your poetry to open my eyes. Congratulations on this nice piece.
Puddifoot Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:27 AM
appropriate poem from a sun worshipper, andrea! such a relaxed, sleepy feel about this one; congrats on your win! oh and thanks for the birthday blog you did for me, I was trying to keep that quiet! haha but it was nice of you all the same :)
Delaney Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:33 PM
Congratulations......quite a reverie you were in...blame the warm sun and being very tired.... SuZ
Richards Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 7:17 PM
I was not surprised that Constance loved this one........ a fragment of time to slip away into one's own peace of mind. I loved it!! Congratulations!
Mandani Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 6:59 PM
That time will come to everyone when the world will simply fade away. Nice write.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 4:11 PM
I expected to see this one high on the list. Congratulations.
May Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 4:03 PM
congrats on your win Andrea
Adams Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 3:14 PM
sometimes we need these little moments of escape....enjoyed reading this lovely poem...congrats on your win :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:43 PM
love, love this congrats on win Shadow x smile
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