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Fragility

a motionless pond reflects a fragile sky clouds want to swallow the sun blossoms are small tears skimming over old wounds where doves fly against the wind ~ we share the same sun and as moon touches your face I wake with tomorrow's dream lessons we have learned come not from holding the stars but from where we share the light
_______________________________________________________________ Inspired by Deb's Contest: Walk Softly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/10/2013 1:57:00 AM
Beautiful, Carrie...A well-deserved win....Yes, this was soft like a feather blown in the wind...serene...hugs
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Date: 9/8/2013 9:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/8/2013 9:43:00 AM
Congrats on your superb win,Carrie..Splendid write...
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Date: 9/8/2013 5:33:00 AM
this is good well penned Carrie congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/8/2013 5:33:00 AM
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Date: 9/7/2013 9:03:00 PM
congratulations Carrie, in Debbie's awesome contest....... SKAT
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Date: 9/7/2013 7:45:00 PM
beautiful poem Carrie....congrats on your big win :)
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Date: 9/7/2013 5:53:00 PM
Always so thoughtful, always the pull of heart strings. [PS I never have any idea that its you, you constantly grow & change!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 9/7/2013 5:35:00 AM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 9/7/2013 4:55:00 AM
good morning Carrie, a very nice win...linda
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Date: 9/6/2013 10:55:00 PM
OMG, THE BEST HANDS DOWN. How did I ever miss this one. FAVE. and congratulations.
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Date: 9/6/2013 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie xx
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Date: 9/6/2013 5:25:00 PM
Congrats Carrie lovely words ...Seren
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Date: 9/6/2013 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your number one spot.
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Date: 9/6/2013 4:07:00 PM
congrats on a great win Carrie
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:52:00 PM
Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:09:00 AM
great sedoka, sending soup mail..PD
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Date: 8/17/2013 6:58:00 AM
This is absolutely beautiful. It's good to be reading you once more. Have a great, inspired, blessed day!
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Date: 8/16/2013 1:23:00 PM
Truth you have spoken in the last three lines..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..I am sure that it will be a winner ..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your comments are valuable to me..Sara
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Date: 8/16/2013 11:41:00 AM
Absolutely! Tremendous message here!
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Date: 8/16/2013 10:45:00 AM
- Yes, very well written ..... lovely, Carrie.... I share both the sun and the moon with you! - Luck in contest! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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