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Fragile Find soft float like silk on willows a house spider's spot fragile find for a Eureka a creature's cozy corner comfort comes to quick close this instinctive insect will build a new kingdom designed to trap an unwary prey 1/26/17 Contest - Form F Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/10/2017 1:02:00 PM

Hi Janis, I love looking at the fine artistry of spider webs....and it's true, we whisk them away only for them to appear in another corner or high on a shelf....this was clever. Congratulations on your placing in the contest!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/10/2017 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Paulette. I appreciate your comments and your stopping by.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/3/2017 6:51:00 PM

Congrats, Janis. Beautifully done (and I don't like spiders at all )

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/10/2017 5:52:00 PM

Join the club about spiders. Thanks for the appreciation.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 2/3/2017 3:09:00 AM

Very creatively written. Congratulations, Janis.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2017 11:27:00 AM

Thanks, Afzal. Your comments are always so encouraging.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/2/2017 10:17:00 PM

Congrats, Janis!

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2017 11:28:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. Blessings.

Constance La France

Date: 2/2/2017 9:08:00 PM

Janis, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2017 11:30:00 AM

Each one of your poetry form contests gets more challenging. Wonderful idea for contests. Thanks for my placement.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/2/2017 8:47:00 PM

Janis, You do Fibonacci like Liberace did piano. Such flow and rhythm...Well done, Janis, I give it a 7. Congratulations, on accepting and acing the harder challenge of F forms.

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2017 11:32:00 AM

Thanks Reason. I love your comparison but I'm not quite sure I can live up to it. Appreciate the warm comments. Blessings, Janis.

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/2/2017 7:40:00 PM

Wonderful imagery of the fragility and fortitude of nature in your very descriptive Fibonacci poem, Janis. Congrats on your win, but I would have placed this higher. Hugs, Sandra

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 2/3/2017 11:35:00 AM

Thanks, Sandra. But I had entered several other poems that were about the wrong topic because I misread the directions. I'm lucky to have gotten it together in the end and made it at all.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/29/2017 4:37:00 AM

Beautiful Fibonacci, Janis:) I'm always amazed at the spider's ability to spin its web again and again even though we pull it down every time we see one:)

Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/30/2017 1:10:00 PM

They do live precarious lives. Thanks, Jo.