Home » Poems » Wilma Neels » Fractured Sounds

Wilma Neels | + Follow Poet |

Fractured Sounds

fractured sounds are heard the lament of the wind, split the leaves from the trees

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2010 1:27:00 PM

the imagery is wonderful and deep Wilma, i feel the break, enjoyed your poem,,, by the way,, i never knew you where from Africa,, I always thought you where from England,, shame on me if you have told m before,, Nice,, by the way,, you would not like the snow,, I live in Texas and I'm glad e get no snow,, here,, enjoyed your poem,.p.d.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/3/2010 2:33:00 PM

Congrats on your Haiku being featured. "The lament of the wind." I like that. Dave

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 11/3/2010 12:59:00 PM

Congo! Nice one..and Congrats!

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/3/2010 1:51:00 AM

Hi Wilma, a lovely Haiku.You write so cleverly and beautifully. Your work is a joy to read. Congratulations on making the feature page,this will give more people the chance to read your excellent words. Love June(sylvia)

Rhia Madison Thomer

Date: 11/2/2010 4:46:00 PM

beautiful poem with a nice image. congratulation on the feature. --Madison

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/1/2010 2:33:00 PM

good for you Wilma..congrats on being featured. This is NICE...BG

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/1/2010 10:30:00 AM

congrats on the featured poem this week!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2010 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Wilma. Love, Carol

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/31/2010 10:39:00 PM

Congrats Wilma, keep that pen loaded with ink. Luv, Joy (Jew)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/31/2010 8:33:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all today with luv my sweet friend...

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/30/2010 8:07:00 AM

A nice October feel to this lovely write my dear Poet and Partner in crime...love Michael...hope yor weekend is great!!!

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/29/2010 8:29:00 PM

An excellent Haiku painted here, Wilma..also perfect for Holloween...'the lament of the wind, split...' Love it! Have a great Sunday, already there!! Love, Audrey

Diane Locksley

Date: 10/29/2010 10:46:00 AM

A great haiku, Wilma. Appreciated the unique imagery. Best to you, Diane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/29/2010 10:30:00 AM

This is a very good haiku, wilma. matching the lament of the wind with the leaves split from the trees. Awesome!

James Peranteau

Date: 10/29/2010 6:08:00 AM

This Autumn is bringing some really great writes dear poet ! This one is included ! thanx for sharing...it really is a fine Autumn da in my neck of the woods. much love, james soup mail

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/28/2010 5:57:00 PM

this is lovely Wilma..take care~Deb

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/28/2010 2:12:00 PM

A vivid and compelling traditional haiku, Wilma. I like the way you describe the "fractured sounds" as leaves fall from trees. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/28/2010 12:46:00 PM

I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Wilma. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2010 12:41:00 PM

Great idea and presentation in this Haiku..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for letting me know that I placed in the contest...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/28/2010 12:00:00 PM

Wow Wilma what a visual picture here u have penned my friend.. so sweet and dear.. I could see the leaves parting from the trees .. and your title is so awesome .. enjoyed this afternoon..luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/28/2010 8:38:00 AM

We get lots of wind here in the fall. sometimes it makes me crazy..well, crazier..lol...I love "fractured sounds" BG

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/28/2010 7:57:00 AM

Nice picture of the autumn about to say goodbye, Wilma