Four Cafes

Chantilly lace curtains of my apartment window ripple in the cold January night. From here, I observe mooring lights that illumine the docks in this petty northern port and four cafés that lean toward one another, side-by-side, though separate and apart. I wonder at their co-location. Their twinkling lights blur together in a loud kaleidoscope of color.

The harbor winds carry putrid odors to my window. Sidewalk signs cover most of the walkway. Though too distant to register detail, I discern the outline in flickering neon of two women outside the smallest café as men clad in oilskin foulies lumber into the second, barely a bar, as they all are. Faint modern dance rhythms announce a tiny dance floor inside the third. The brightest café-bar has no one visible. A lone figure in casual attire moves from café to café, not staying long. He moves in the same pattern, over and again, stopping once to chat with the women. I wonder what or who he seeks. The women disappear down a side pathway.

With a desultory outlook for the evening, I close my window, wrap against the cold, and descend the European-styled spiral staircase.
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Congratulations on your win in this contest. Prose poetry ... Nice poem.
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 6:48 AM
Thank you for your kind words Alfonso. I appreciate the time you took to read and comment on this prose. :)
Richards Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 9:10 PM
Congratulations on your win, Linda.This one is my favourite of all the entries, spelling error not withstanding.Suzette :))
Fowler Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 6:52 AM
Thanks Suzette. For me, either word works. It is a petty harbor, or a pretty harbor - either LOL
Agustin Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 8:03 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Fowler Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Thank you dear Beata. :)
Anaya Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in a [first Prose Contest] ever here! Magnifico, It has me wanting more of this mysterious man! Sadly my attempt was edited too many times and well, happy for you Linda!
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:56 PM
Oh Anaya. I went through at least four iterations before settling on this one. LOL Thanks! :)
Kauffman Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:03 AM
A wonderful sense of apprehension and mystery Linda. I love the ending wondering where are you going? Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Thank you Sam. I enjoyed this contest and wrote half a short story before I told myself I had to stop! LOL. A little editing brought me to this entry. Thank you again! :)
Peck Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Oh Linda, This is just lovely. I was there as I read it. Congratulations, my friend!
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Many thanks dear Ann. I like your words :)
Ward Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 2:22 AM
Nicely done. Did you mean "petty", though? It would read better as "pretty" in the context. Maybe it was a spelling error? Anyway, in judging the prose, I find it excellent in other respects, so it has been awarded a glory prize, Linda.
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 4:54 PM
Hi Julia. Thank you for a glory placement in your contest. I'm honored. I thoroughly enjoy your contests and the challenges you present. Yes, "petty" is a misspelling that I did not catch. Although, I suppose the harbor front could be small and insignificant. LOL I will change to "pretty".
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