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Four Cafes

Chantilly lace curtains of my apartment window ripple in the cold January night. From here, I observe mooring lights that illumine the docks in this petty northern port and four cafés that lean toward one another, side-by-side, though separate and apart. I wonder at their co-location. Their twinkling lights blur together in a loud kaleidoscope of color. The harbor winds carry putrid odors to my window. Sidewalk signs cover most of the walkway. Though too distant to register detail, I discern the outline in flickering neon of two women outside the smallest café as men clad in oilskin foulies lumber into the second, barely a bar, as they all are. Faint modern dance rhythms announce a tiny dance floor inside the third. The brightest café-bar has no one visible. A lone figure in casual attire moves from café to café, not staying long. He moves in the same pattern, over and again, stopping once to chat with the women. I wonder what or who he seeks. The women disappear down a side pathway. With a desultory outlook for the evening, I close my window, wrap against the cold, and descend the European-styled spiral staircase.

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Date: 3/16/2023 11:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in this contest. Prose poetry ... Nice poem.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/17/2023 6:48:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Alfonso. I appreciate the time you took to read and comment on this prose. :)
Date: 3/15/2023 9:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Linda.This one is my favourite of all the entries, spelling error not withstanding.Suzette :))
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/16/2023 6:52:00 AM
Thanks Suzette. For me, either word works. It is a petty harbor, or a pretty harbor - either LOL
Date: 3/15/2023 8:03:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/16/2023 6:51:00 AM
Thank you dear Beata. :)
Date: 3/15/2023 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in a [first Prose Contest] ever here! Magnifico, It has me wanting more of this mysterious man! Sadly my attempt was edited too many times and well, happy for you Linda!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/15/2023 4:56:00 PM
Oh Anaya. I went through at least four iterations before settling on this one. LOL Thanks! :)
Date: 3/15/2023 10:03:00 AM
A wonderful sense of apprehension and mystery Linda. I love the ending wondering where are you going? Congratulations on your win. Blessings!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/15/2023 4:55:00 PM
Thank you Sam. I enjoyed this contest and wrote half a short story before I told myself I had to stop! LOL. A little editing brought me to this entry. Thank you again! :)
Date: 3/15/2023 8:48:00 AM
Oh Linda, This is just lovely. I was there as I read it. Congratulations, my friend!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/15/2023 4:54:00 PM
Many thanks dear Ann. I like your words :)
Date: 3/15/2023 2:22:00 AM
Nicely done. Did you mean "petty", though? It would read better as "pretty" in the context. Maybe it was a spelling error? Anyway, in judging the prose, I find it excellent in other respects, so it has been awarded a glory prize, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/15/2023 4:54:00 PM
Hi Julia. Thank you for a glory placement in your contest. I'm honored. I thoroughly enjoy your contests and the challenges you present. Yes, "petty" is a misspelling that I did not catch. Although, I suppose the harbor front could be small and insignificant. LOL I will change to "pretty".
Date: 3/9/2023 9:37:00 AM
Nice write Linda, very seductive... this definitely meets the specs for Julia's contest and should do well. She always puts together a good contest and is an excellent judge.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/9/2023 11:11:00 AM
Thank you so much Mark. I admit to getting carried away and after 450 words (true, LOL) I decided I needed to slash and burn a few lines. ;) Julia presents awesome contests that are intriguing and fun to attempt. I read your entry and found it mysteriously melancholy. Thanks for commenting :).

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