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Four Cafes

I live in a quaint building high up on the top floor and from my apartment window I like to watch the scene below on the wide cobbled square. On a cold January night the lights of four Cafés are mingling with the twinkling of the stars in the sky. A sign above each doorway poking out reads Café 1, Café 2, Café 3, and Café 4. Each serve hot meals at moderate prices, along with wine and liquor. They are well preserved wooden buildings separated by alleyways. I find the comings and goings of the different characters entering intriguing. There are regulars like an old man. I see him cross the square and disappear into Café 3. I peaked in the doors once and each Café has a different décor. There is a young woman who comes, very pretty but alone, is she sad? She likes Café 2. I Like to watch the sweet lovers that all seem to like Café 1. Tonight, a man is entering Café 4. He is handsome with dark flowing hair and my heart flutters. Do I have the courage to leave my window? ________________________ March 06, 2023 Poetry/Prose/Four Cafes Copyright Protected, ID 03-1529-689-06 All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Four Cafes Sponsor, Julia Ward, Judged 03/15/2023 Fourth Place

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Date: 3/16/2023 11:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your fourth place win in this contest. Constance la France
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Constance La France
Date: 3/17/2023 7:31:00 AM
Alfonso, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/15/2023 4:48:00 PM
Great write for Julia's contest Constance. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/16/2023 9:32:00 AM
Linda, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/15/2023 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance. A clear bird's eye view of life on a "wide cobbled square." Blessings to you!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/16/2023 9:32:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the congratulation and comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/15/2023 8:57:00 AM
Very lovely and intriguing, Constance. An air of mystery. Congratulations!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/15/2023 9:59:00 AM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/6/2023 5:58:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2023 8:57:00 AM
Mark, thank you so much for the compliment, one perfect word, blessings, Constance
Date: 3/6/2023 3:22:00 PM
Hello Constance, if you really feel for a coffee go down to the cafe and have a coffee with that handsome man. Hugs
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2023 10:31:00 AM
Hello Constance, oh, Constance i hope you meet him again and is able to have a cup of coffee with him. That is my wish for you Constance. Love & Friendship /Darlene/
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Constance La France
Date: 3/7/2023 9:00:00 AM
Darlene, thank you so much for the visit, I enjoyed writing to this poem a lot. Oh, but I had the courage! I actually met a man at the bus stop who offered to help me carry my bags home, he was so nice and handsome and I wanted to invite him for coffee, but I didn't and let him walk out of my life, blessings, Constance

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