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Four Angels In a Field of Green

"Four Angels In A field Of Green" ________________________ deep carmine pink lips her flowing sun dress, fuschia a spring flower blooms... ________________________ lite pastel blue print with a splash of daffodil innocence dances... ________________________ amber champagne flesh her raspberry sun dress flows bitter sweet her love... ________________________ dark scarlet draped grace a midriff of native brown I mingle in thought... ________________________ Senryu String Poet~Rick Parise Contest~ "The Sundress"

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James Fraser

Date: 4/9/2011 6:03:00 AM

Congratulation's on your fine win Rick in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/4/2011 1:44:00 PM

Congratulations on your deserving win in Constance's contest, Rick! Very beautiful Senryu so descriptive, reminds me of all the colors of the bougainvillea flower. Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2011 10:00:00 AM

It looks like you've seen some adorable sundresses, Rick, and I love the way you describe the "four angels" who are wearing them in your senryu string. Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 4/4/2011 7:51:00 AM

Wonderful write!Congrats ^Rick on your win---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win ^Rick in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2011 11:45:00 PM

senryus for a sundress, rick! what an original idea... CHEERS for hitting the winning charts.. wow! :) huggs

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/3/2011 8:56:00 PM

Such beautiful four angels of yours Rick. Big Congratulations.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/3/2011 6:42:00 PM

This is such a unique approach to the sundress challenge, Rick-- really enjoyed this one -- love how you each give such a different personality :) Congrats on your win :) btw sending you soupmail in a bit :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2011 6:22:00 PM

Congratulations on the eighth place win in the contest of Constance, Rick

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/3/2011 6:02:00 PM

Congrats Rick my friend on your terrific win in the sundress contest with this wonderful write luv.. awesome as always ..are your words.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..