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Fortune Cookie (They Always Get Me Coming Back For One More)

chinese clever forever damn this endeavor of whatever a cookie snap with a hopeful treasure a fortune of a prospering measure "Damn Clever These Chinese".......... Damn slam this clever cookie gram nothing ever came of it ! I'm going back for one more round a drink , a bite to eat and one more fortune cookie man ! "Damn Clever These Chinese"..........

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/2/2010 3:16:00 PM

Well, I thought my assigned theme was over the top until I read the one you received. And I must say, this is a VERY clever take on the quote, Rick. Glad you took the high road and gave us a witty write! Blessings to you, my friend, this is terrific! Love, Carolyn

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/2/2010 2:52:00 PM

You did great with a somewhat difficult assignment. You should be in the winners circle. Im still laughing. BG soup mail

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/2/2010 4:00:00 AM

A very interesting entry for the contest

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/2/2010 12:23:00 AM

A nice entry. Wish you all the best