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Spirited meeting, don't faint Real or surreal, it is momentary, as cannot stay long on the same plane Want to protect from mirthless life's winding chimes Only if it was easy as mending the book's spine Rarely lurking demons underneath the bed Don't waste yourself peeking beneath the bed Blindfold daydreaming,lines you up to heaped relics of unsung martyrs in a sepulcher Starkly outshine rabid prince makes shy away the vulture Never be too soft or daft Not completely at fault, for programmed specimen of the mightier craft Amidst the bantering on lease Just don't succumb to the whisper of inherited guilt please In summation to any wrong answer Even rustling waft of your ashes will be sneezed at Don't plug out the sound of closing doors Sign to focus on the right one just designed for you Betide as it was destined Brush frivolous talk aside as choice is destiny's invoice Essential to periodical diuresis of precarious enslavement Rejoice to all sensations, before obfuscated by life's retirement

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Date: 11/24/2015 4:59:00 PM
You did so well here, enjoying this and much more of your poems. I read this poem a short time back. You have a way with words, wish I had the same gift of logic. Love SKAT
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/24/2015 5:05:00 PM
You have indeed and sprinkled with lots of warm compassion. Thanks my dear.
Date: 11/9/2015 2:24:00 AM
Uniquely worded and powerful advice. Congrats to you Samiha. GBU.
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/9/2015 6:07:00 AM
Thanks a lot
Date: 11/8/2015 10:02:00 PM
Superb win samiha with this awesome write... big congrats!
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/9/2015 6:06:00 AM
Thanks a lot
Date: 11/8/2015 9:07:00 AM
Samiha, enjoyed reading your poem.
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/8/2015 9:14:00 AM
I appreciate your comment, thanks
Date: 11/8/2015 7:44:00 AM
Great opening..lol Congrats, Samiha
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/8/2015 9:15:00 AM
A spontaneous one, thank you
Date: 11/7/2015 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/8/2015 12:41:00 AM
You yourself are no less than a supreme throne writer my dear. Thanks.
Date: 11/7/2015 6:18:00 PM
Samiha, you expressed your self well in this piece. You gave some great adivce. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. Thanks for participating in my contest:-)Alexis
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/8/2015 1:41:00 AM
Thanks for your fantastic competition idea, still just a fantasy of how we can retrospectively through time web change our future.
Date: 11/7/2015 3:37:00 PM
Samiha, congrats on your what would you say win. Love SKAT
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/8/2015 12:32:00 AM
Thanks dear. It's twin surprises day for me. Hugs to you
Date: 11/4/2015 4:02:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today.."Brush frivolous talk aside as choice is destiny's invoice"..I particularly like this line..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/4/2015 10:49:00 PM
Such words from my mentor makes my day
Date: 11/4/2015 4:00:00 PM
Samiha, your free verse is impressive and expressive. I feel that you are more at home in this form than with rhyme. Knowing that you are addressing your younger self helps to understand the meaning of your words. You also offer words of advice which only come from experiences of life. #7 ~ Regards // paul
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Samiha Zubair
Date: 11/4/2015 10:48:00 PM
True. In such moments you feel you are the only one who can resurrect the past and mold the future. Only if.

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