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in the dimness a slanted idea straddling the streams desolate as a seagull breeze yanked spins enduring virgin prayers love is the pearl of my ordeal no pity from the silent purplish blue echoes meandering consuming meager extension secret whiff shifts fastened by an impulse and a fantasy 1st PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: March 18, 2022 A BRIAN STRAND 1092 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 3/20/2022 5:22:00 AM
"Secret whiff shifts" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/18/2022 8:03:00 PM
I wonder what is bothering her ! However the comparison of her to a lonely seagull is so very apt !
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