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Forgotten Words Still Hurt

All the money in the world can’t buy yesterday The shadow cast on days gone by cannot be changed that way Forgotten words still can hurt, their memory to reign We harvest what we sow in crimson fields of pain A tempest borne of dark intent still lingers in the night Even though regret has come and redress brought to light The shore of woe’s forgiveness, an often rocky climb Yet sad and misty days can clear To grace anew in time As long as there is love inside somewhere in one’s heart The shadows cast on days gone by disperse for a new start 4/13/18 Contest: Ten Words Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 4/27/2018 1:49:00 AM
Congrats on your richly deserved win. Would that your last stanza always be true: Love somewhere deep in there,...then apologies and forgiveness, so Divine! Best of everything, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/27/2018 5:55:00 AM
Thanks Gershon, I certainly appreciate your kind comments !!
Date: 4/24/2018 7:18:00 AM
Congrats, Mike, and an upbeat ending, too. Well done. Regards, Viv
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/24/2018 9:34:00 AM
Thank Viv xxoo
Date: 4/23/2018 10:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! I really got into this. I like how you opened the door for resolution too. A fave.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/24/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan, I really appreciate that xxoo
Date: 4/23/2018 6:30:00 PM
Wow Mike , amazing!! You really did so well with this. Excellent lines and usage of the words required. Love the positive ending too. And yes, we are both winners. Yay..! Congrats :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/24/2018 9:35:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, Happy Tuesday xxoo
Date: 4/23/2018 5:45:00 PM
Hi Mike, You made good use of the chosen words. And you made some points. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/24/2018 9:37:00 AM
Thanks Alexis, I was really happy to have placed xxoo
Date: 4/23/2018 1:27:00 PM
"We harvest what we sow in crimson fields of pain"...Congrats on your win Mike..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/23/2018 2:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph !!
Date: 4/18/2018 8:49:00 AM
Shifting shadows and remembered words. The cure of many years and love.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/24/2018 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Kim xxoo
Date: 4/13/2018 2:01:00 PM
Excellent use of the ten words Mike!! We can't buy yesterday. That's for certain. A reflective yet uplifting poem as it comes full circle. Best of luck in the contest. ~ Judy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/13/2018 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Judy, I always appreciate your kind comments and notes, Happy Friday xxoo
Date: 4/13/2018 8:35:00 AM
Mike, I REALLY like this poem! Yes, there will be shadows, but they can be dispersed. Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/13/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thank so much, Janice xxxooo
Date: 4/13/2018 8:32:00 AM
Some memories do hurt..I like the positive ending of your poem..you blended the words seamlessly--best for a win, Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/13/2018 8:53:00 AM
Thanks as always, Vijay for your kind encouragement !!!

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