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Forgotten Winter

Weighted now with ancient mystery she stands among serenity in full bloom of twilight's sigh with abundant bouquets of wild sage and thyme that makes aging possibly worth the wait nights weighted with dead leaves and hidden wounds vanish in the wind while autumn disappears leaving only the springtime frozen in forgotten winters leaving dreams of a second childhood
____________________________________________________ For the contest: "The Old Age" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/29/2013 9:17:00 PM
Vary nice Carrie ; autumn into winter my favorite Gothic season. I've thought autumn poems should be written on parchment paper that feels like leaf in your hand . Well done .-----Michael
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Date: 10/23/2013 8:26:00 PM
is this a double Nonet? Carrie, , awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:23:00 PM
another wonderful win... congrats Carrie... LINDA
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Date: 10/21/2013 5:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Beautifully penned as usual
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Date: 10/21/2013 10:36:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win, Carrie! Beautiful!! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/19/2013 9:55:00 PM
Inspiring. Beautiful format.
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:31:00 AM
Lovely and apt. Great writing Carrie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2013 5:59:00 AM
Ahh!! Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2013 1:39:00 AM
this was so gorgeous. Congrats, Carrie.
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Date: 10/18/2013 11:48:00 AM
congrats on your first place win Carrie :)
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Date: 10/18/2013 6:19:00 AM
Congrats on the first place win in my contest, Carrie
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Date: 10/13/2013 12:09:00 PM
An excellent Nonet by you Carrie!Loved it!
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Date: 10/11/2013 3:19:00 PM
- A breath taking poem with cool shape Carrie !!!! - Love it ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/11/2013 9:40:00 AM
Wow a concrete shape poetry, must b hard. Yet u managd it so well! Kudos and hats off to u! Pls do review my latest poem too. Tc.
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Date: 10/10/2013 7:04:00 PM
love how you did one in forward and one in reverse it make the hourglass shape and goes perfect with your content...which is superb Carrie! reads like a winner to me :)
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Date: 10/10/2013 5:04:00 PM
Such an interesting concept, forgotten winters~ lovely imagery.
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Date: 10/10/2013 1:37:00 PM
Powerful and poignant, SOUP MAIL Light & Love
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Date: 10/10/2013 11:02:00 AM
Looks like an hour glass. As our lives deminish they will flow into a new life and realization. The end will be our new beginning opening to a wide open glorious future.
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Date: 10/10/2013 9:37:00 AM
Very creative layout of your vey poetic words, dear friend! Not easy... well done! Hugs xox
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:40:00 AM
very cleverly written Carrie great description of aging Shadow x smile
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:36:00 AM
You have blown me away once again. Such powerful atmosphere & emotional downfalls embed your incredible lines. Damn.
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Date: 10/10/2013 8:00:00 AM
Wisdom of aging wrapped in majestic poetry!
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Date: 10/9/2013 10:56:00 PM
Lovely one Carrie...Seren
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Date: 10/9/2013 8:41:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Carrie
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