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My eyes are growing weaker; words are blurred. Twilight approaches, but for me it's never too soon. With a smile, I close my eyes to life's harsh reality and wait for my love, who arrives with the moon. My vision clears, and in his hand is a blue velvet box. A kiss to my cheek and he offers me my favorite flower, fragrant blue violets and a beautiful engagement ring. Each night he makes me feel like a princess in a tower. I wish I could remember his name. Is it Dan, or Michael? He is so handsome but I remember he left to fight a war. He told me he'd send for me, but maybe he just forgot. Was it in France or... somewhere... some place very far. Bill? Maybe I have his name tucked in my box of secrets. I wonder what happened and why didn't he send for me? The only things inside the box are dried violets, a pretty ring, and this old piece of paper, an old plane ticket dated 1943. <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> December 17th 2015 Combination of Three Words <> Sponsor: Laura Loo

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Date: 1/12/2016 11:34:00 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 1/12/2016 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations Lin for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thank you, Hans.
Date: 1/10/2016 11:10:00 PM
Lin Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:31:00 AM
Lin, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Date: 1/3/2016 12:26:00 PM
The thoughts are so gently put forward! Congrats Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/3/2016 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, Balveen.
Date: 1/3/2016 11:14:00 AM
Lin, thank you for being a part of my contest...It was a wonderful write, and oh how I love everything you write...:)-luloo
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/3/2016 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Luloo.
Date: 12/29/2015 12:14:00 PM
Heartfelt poem. Definitely a 7. :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/29/2015 12:37:00 PM
Thank you so very much.
Date: 12/17/2015 6:11:00 PM
This is so sweetly sad..well done. BG
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/18/2015 3:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot, BG.
Date: 12/17/2015 1:25:00 PM
Oh Lin this heartbreaking brought a tear to my eye - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/17/2015 1:52:00 PM
:-) having friends like you on here I have reason to smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 12/17/2015 1:30:00 PM
Thank you so very much, and dry your eyes.. No reason to cry over anything in here ;)

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