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This was meant to be for BW's latest contest but my Wi-Fi went out before I could post it.  It is an Etheree/Monorhyme.

Rose cheek glows, as love grows on soft pillows, my heart will expose, when your sad feeling shows, how lonely are your sorrows. I will take, from you, your life's woes and fill your soul with flowers and bows until, bleeding, time should whither and close. 04/15/2017

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Date: 4/28/2017 10:36:00 PM
Such romantic you are James :) Beautiful I love it..
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Date: 4/23/2017 5:49:00 PM
Good imagery and flow are both presented well within their lines. You have a gift with words that is simple yet so powerful. Emile.
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James Inman
Date: 4/23/2017 6:18:00 PM
Thank you for the kind comment Emile.
Date: 4/22/2017 9:53:00 AM
Wow, what an incredible last line, and a tender loving poem:) Amitiés
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James Inman
Date: 4/22/2017 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Marie.
Date: 4/20/2017 8:54:00 PM
I agree with Connie. So enchanting this is, Ralph. Good to see a new romantic poem of yours posted!
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James Inman
Date: 4/21/2017 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Date: 4/18/2017 3:21:00 AM
Enchantingly romantic James! Too bad you didn't get to enter it. 7 ; )
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James Inman
Date: 4/19/2017 7:14:00 AM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 4/17/2017 1:12:00 AM
:) what a sweet poem. A person would thrive on such kind of love.
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James Inman
Date: 4/17/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for visiting Eileen. If only it were as easy to have such feelings returned. I appreciate the nice comment.

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