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I planned a trip to take me back to yore To find the loving days of long ago Back to all of the friends we used to know And the familiar sweetness of before. But there were none who lived there any more, I could not fin a street with status quo. Not one thing from those wonder years. When life was so sublimely without tears. All vanished with you when you went away, Those sunny, merry, loving days of old. The happiness of youth’s not meant to stay, No more will loving arms ever enfold. My dearest love, when God took you away He took the sunshine from my summer day. Written June 6/11 By: Joyce Johnson 6/10/11 Written in Iambic Pentameter For Francine's contest: Sonnets, Sonnets, Everywhere

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Date: 6/17/2011 9:23:00 AM
Dear Joyce, just stopping by briefly before the test, but I want you to know how much I love this poem. I could relate to the message and you wrote it in perfect form. Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 6/17/2011 4:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "Sonnet" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 7:01:00 PM
congrats on your HM in the contest with this touching sonnet Joyce
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Date: 6/16/2011 6:58:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your HM with this splendid Sonnet so lovely my friend.. enjoy well deserved honor luv..
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:29:00 AM
Oh, on, you know I can relate to the sad sentiments you express so beautifully in your sonnet. Francine will love your entry! Best wishes and much love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2011 7:38:00 PM
thank you for entering my contest Joyce
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Date: 6/10/2011 7:08:00 PM
Joyce this was a great piece of poetry, enjoyed it. have not heard from you for a while, check out some of my new poems if you could please?
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