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Forever When the moon burst it cracked a smile To marry in radiant style The North Star seals young glowing love Brings kindness and light from above A beach fire sparks vows with a chime Gives birth ties tides ever in time Waxed in passion foot prints take sight Sunshine seals dawn out of the night 28th December 2019 Syllables checked howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 1/27/2020 8:30:00 AM
I like how pleasing these words are, they painted lovely images in my mind.
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Date: 1/16/2020 10:37:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Kai, congratulations your win. Eve
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 1/17/2020 3:42:00 AM
Thank you Eve. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 1/16/2020 8:20:00 AM
Great write, Kai. Nicely done my friend. Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie
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Date: 12/30/2019 8:24:00 PM
beautiful Kai...all of my favorites (beach, moon, sun) in one poem... wonderful penning... Happy New Year my friend :) hugs
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Date: 12/29/2019 4:21:00 PM
Very nicely done, Kai! Great title too!
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Date: 12/28/2019 5:34:00 PM
otherworldly and yet, similar to the Nativity night. Thansk for reaching for the heavens, Kai.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/29/2019 6:37:00 AM
Thank you Anil. I appreciate you reading and liking my poetry. Happy New Year and Happy Writing, Kai
Date: 12/28/2019 3:42:00 PM
Enjoyed this romantic scene. Lovely take on the contest.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/29/2019 6:42:00 AM
Thank you Juliet. I must watch the sun rise tomorrow ...
Date: 12/28/2019 7:57:00 AM
Such awesome imagery, Kai! Janice
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 12/28/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thank you Janice. The poem is an anniversary poem for my wife Tai.

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