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Forever a silk moon Will sit on hearts strewn In my and your snow To remind us both Many a sunshine From our diamond Did we mingle In a mighty flame November 5, 2017 For the Contest 8-Line Poem 1-5 words Hosted by Rick Parise

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Date: 11/22/2017 3:01:00 PM
Beautiful love poetry. I am surprised it didn't place. It is a winner.
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Date: 11/6/2017 1:44:00 PM
- Let it burn forever and ever, Probir - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/7/2017 8:42:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine ...
Date: 11/5/2017 10:37:00 PM
Wow Probir, breathtaking... eight lines of scintillating beauty. Great lines with beautiful words and artistic phrasing. Exquisite! Good luck in the contest but already a winner with me!
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Date: 11/6/2017 6:52:00 AM
I am glad that you like it ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/5/2017 2:17:00 PM
Eight perfect lines Probir.
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Date: 11/6/2017 6:53:00 AM
Thank you, Elizabeth ...
Date: 11/5/2017 9:43:00 AM
Well written, Probir--best for a win!
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Date: 11/6/2017 6:56:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Date: 11/5/2017 6:57:00 AM
The memories bring warmth, indeed. Lovely write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/6/2017 6:57:00 AM
Yes, Eileen ... It is relatable ... Thank you ...
Date: 11/5/2017 5:56:00 AM
This is lovely, Probir. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/6/2017 6:59:00 AM
Thank you, Agnes ...
Date: 11/5/2017 5:44:00 AM
Wow very nicely written Probir. I enjoyed this today :)
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Date: 11/6/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi ...

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