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Girl On A Swing by Winslow Homer

“Give me a swing and all maturity goes out the window.” – Unknown Father and brother made a tree swing They tied a rock with rope and threw It wrapped around the tree limb That swing was so much fun Didn't last forever We moved, left swing Forever Behind Gone Date written: 02/18/2023 Contest: Writing Challenge-F Words Sponsor: Constance La France Checked syllable count with How Many Syllables Checked grammar on this site

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Ann Peck

Date: 2/23/2023 9:01:00 AM

Oh Sara, A sweet/sad reminder of those things we left behind...I love it. Congratulations on win!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/23/2023 11:50:00 AM

Why, thank you, Ann. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/22/2023 2:34:00 PM

Sad when favorite houses with all the things that made good memories, have to be left behind. A lovely poem Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2023 4:42:00 PM

Why, thank you, Wendy. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/21/2023 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Sara! Something always wonderful about your poetry! This one swings with memories.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2023 4:07:00 AM

I appreciate the kind review with congratulations. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/21/2023 12:56:00 PM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sara. This is a real gem, adorned with endless quality Diction."

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/21/2023 2:46:00 PM

Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/21/2023 11:38:00 AM

Life does move on doesn't it Sara. So often we have to leave behind simple joys but they are always live in us through memories and seem to guide our new steps. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and prayers.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/21/2023 12:41:00 PM

Thank you, Sam. I need all the blessings and prayers I can get. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 2/21/2023 2:38:00 AM

Sara, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done, I like the image and the quote also, blessings, Constance

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/21/2023 3:44:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by to comment and let me know I placed, Constance. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/20/2023 5:56:00 AM

How true is Winslow Homer's quote - never heard it before but love it, I LOVE SWINGS! As for your Nonet absolutely beautiful, but sad you had to leave your swing you loved so much behind, forever. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/20/2023 7:28:00 AM

Jennifer, Yes, I left more than my swing that day but I did not know it at the time. Thanks for your visit and taking time to comment. Sara