Forbidden

Your smile is toxic to me, I get all giddy and my heart skips a beat whenever I'm in your presence. Yet, you don't know; I'm heads over heals in love with you. For unrequited love is a forbidden fruit.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/21/2023 11:31:00 AM

Brilliant Yalto verse, Emile:-) A belated congratulations on your well-deserved win!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/21/2023 12:10:00 PM

Thanks, Edward, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/21/2023 11:21:00 AM

Well said Emile in your eloquent poetic style. Love the Yalto form that gives emphasis to each thoughtfully crafted line of longing! Congratulations on your win my friend! Blessings.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/21/2023 11:31:00 AM

Thanks, Sam, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/21/2023 7:55:00 AM

Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/21/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thanks, Sara, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/21/2023 6:31:00 AM

Well done, my friend. Since the beginning of humanity, there are those who go after forbidden fruit…sweet but then bitter. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/21/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thanks, Kim, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Constance La France

Date: 2/21/2023 2:25:00 AM

Emile, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done, I like the image and quote also, blessings, Constance

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/21/2023 8:57:00 AM

Thanks, Constance, as always, I appreciate both the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.