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“No matter how low we fall, God holds our hand ~ All’s enabled, if this truth we understand” ~ quote by poet Both Adam and Eve were tempted To eat the forbidden fruit Perhaps their fall could be preempted If they weren't so resolute To take the devil's route Let us together attempt to reconstruct This metaphorical tale Why did Adam and Eve self-destruct Drinking not from the holy grail Thus their soul growth derail Eating the apple brought about shame Of their naked body Aroused lower mind no doubt to blame Making them a limited somebody Entertaining thoughts shoddy Made in God's image man was complete Essence of divine light From head to toe at all times bliss replete Temptation became the blight Denuding spherical sight Male and female being our polarities within Apple representing animal lust Negating God's love and light the original sin Succumbing to ego cravings unjust Thus doomed to ensoul organic dust The serpent is our ego; the devil in disguise Cajoling man to act on his own Indulging in desires, stifling soul's bliss rise Head over heart, love dethrone A dark destiny, we now bemoan Fortunately, we can reverse the error made Simply by giving love a nod We then enter God's heavenly blissful glade Tip toeing into heart unshod By His boundless grace overawed 15-February-2023 Writing Challenge -F Words poetry contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 2/23/2023 9:07:00 AM
Thought-provoking poem, Seeker. Reminder of original sin, that we continue to ignore. Congratulations on win!
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Date: 2/23/2023 5:07:00 PM
Thank you, Ann ~ ignorance of our true nature, being cause of our descent, recognition enabling ascent.
Date: 2/21/2023 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations! Eating the apple brought about shame Of their naked body Aroused lower mind …entertaining thoughts shoddy. I always find it interesting in cults how it ends up with sex at the center. How we exchange the good God gave us for perversion. God indeed gave us good things…our choice to go our own way,
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Date: 2/23/2023 5:05:00 PM
There’s nothing wrong with sex or for that matter with any pleasure provided we understand it is transient. If we say ‘I witness an urge arising in my form, which is but a vehicle to navigate earth’ … then, with this understanding, whether we engage or disengage, it doesn’t matter. There is no bondage.
Date: 2/21/2023 11:57:00 AM
Indeed we can "reverse the error made" with our choices Seeker. Even through the shame of the apple, God gives us chance after chance to seek God's way into joy! What a wonderful poem Seeker. Blessings to you.
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Date: 2/23/2023 5:02:00 PM
Or we may say, we all live through this tale, each alone, separated from source owing to ignorance by identifying with limited mind-body. Once ignorance is no more, suffering is no more.
Date: 2/21/2023 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on this winner in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 2/21/2023 8:09:00 AM
Thank you dear Sara
Date: 2/21/2023 2:42:00 AM
Seeker, a wonderful write and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge F Words, well done, In like the image and your quote also, blessings, Constance
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Date: 2/21/2023 4:21:00 AM
Thanks for hosting, Constance. I’m always delighted to participate in your innovative contests.
Date: 2/20/2023 9:21:00 PM
A wonderful writing ! I feel this should have been made POEM of the DAY! Lovely interpretation of the original sin. Congratulations Seeker friend on your well deserved win. Into my FAVE.
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Date: 2/20/2023 11:08:00 PM
Thank you dear Valsa ~ I’m delighted that you enjoyed this write so much, God bless
Date: 2/15/2023 6:41:00 AM
There's that danged ego again! Pesky little critter...Draw the circle that takes him in. :)
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Date: 2/17/2023 12:14:00 AM
Indeed, that’s how it is, as you have so astutely observed, Linda
Date: 2/15/2023 12:15:00 AM
That's a thoughtful poem, US:)
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Date: 2/15/2023 12:49:00 AM
Thank you, Jo

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