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For Jim: An Alaska Rambler

I think of how you must have been in bygone days with friends from your boyhood. From things you’ve said, I picture you back then blazing trails and camping in the Cincinnati Wood. And then perhaps you stood a man at seventeen with one carnation pinned onto your suit. Vernal still, and on the threshold of your dreams, you’d blaze a path anew and leave your roots. Years passed. Only you can fill in all the spaces of what you heard and tasted; what you did; pursuits, accomplishments, and the many places, and when you found Alaska, I was just a kid! I’m certain that you felt at home, grew bold on the tundra, moved with feline grace, and maybe kayaked there, viewed double rainbows, hunted, and knew the color of gold, climbed mountains and inhaled the pristine air. You’ve seen the eagle soar; fulfilled a destiny. So much you’ve done in all your fruitful life. You served your country, married, made a family, coached softball, taught and traveled; loved your wife. Today you move more slowly, or so you’ve told me. I’ve never seen your face. Better do I know your soul. I see you as a wine finely aged – mulberry, red and sweet – not bitter – and you long for a life that’s full. Behind closed doors you sit alone in your chair. I envision books displayed, numerous on a shelf. Despite this show of knowledge gleaned, your house seems bare. Your family’s gone, and you’re having to care for yourself. You like to frequent restaurants and watch a little TV, but friends have passed. You need a fresh new plan. Forge a new frontier, my friend. Exclaim your poetry. Poems should have a purpose, and so too must a man. May 29, 2022

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Date: 8/5/2022 4:43:00 PM
Andrea, Your poems long and short are masterpieces. This is just one example of your mastery. A touching heartfelt tribute superbly executed. I appreciate your opinion of “Them.” And your insights on it. Howard
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Date: 6/4/2022 2:33:00 PM
Suck a thoughtful tribute, and an encouragement to a man that needs to remember the meaningful relationships he built and participated in throughout his life. He sounds like someone that is at peace with his life and I wish him purpose and a fulfilling, rest of his earthly life. Thank you for allowing your love to spread to others through your beautiful and meaningful poetry, Andrea. Love and admiration to you my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 6/4/2022 9:51:00 AM
Wow Andrea. He must have made a great impression on you. This is a really beautiful heartfelt tribute. I enjoyed reading every line. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/31/2022 1:01:00 PM
Such a beautiful sharing of memories. How nice it was that you circled back to the theme of frontiers (Alaska). A FAV of mine. And your ending is about the best ending I've read of yours.
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Date: 5/31/2022 4:59:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute! The best I’ve read in a long time. Straight from your heart, as always, Andrea
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Date: 5/30/2022 6:20:00 PM
Such a heart-warming tribute. You captured the very heart of this poem. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 5/30/2022 5:25:00 PM
This is a lovely tribute to someone you admire greatly. I'm sure he is pleased to read this and will keep it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/30/2022 4:33:00 PM
Nice tribute with great imagery, Andrea!
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Date: 5/30/2022 2:29:00 PM
A beautiful piece for this man, well crafted with appreciation and feeling.
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Date: 5/30/2022 5:31:00 AM
Such a sensitive and intimate write. Charming pen and person you describe -- sounds like someone who helped you dream and find a voice in poetry. Excellent write!
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Date: 5/29/2022 10:55:00 PM
One amazing dedication, so very thoughtful as well, the story, the journey you write of is sincere and say also so much for the Author. Love it.
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Date: 5/29/2022 4:53:00 PM
A beautiful and touching poem Andrea and I love the title! Amazing write! Debx
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Date: 5/29/2022 12:38:00 PM
Your ode, Andrea, is of the greatest quality in terms of its structure and composition. This is an exciting tale, and I adore the way you wrapped it up because I believe that your Alaskan rambler was in fact a genuine person.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/29/2022 1:17:00 PM
Yes but I lost touch with him and he must have passed away by now. He had arthritis, the really bad kind
Date: 5/29/2022 12:17:00 PM
This is a thrilling story, Andrea, and I love how you ended it, for surely your Alaskan rambler was a man. "Poems should have a purpose, and so too must a man." May I take this as a personal motto! Thank you!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/29/2022 1:17:00 PM
Thanks, Milt
Date: 5/29/2022 11:42:00 AM
Enjoyable read Andrea, is it based on a real person. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/29/2022 1:19:00 PM
Yes. One of the first poets I developed a friendship with years ago. I resurrected this old poem never posted anywhere before

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