For Him

My heart pumping my blood each beat full of my love spreading like fire through my being know this

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2009 5:11:00 AM

Beautiful dear Barbara. I can feel the love flowing from your pen. I wish you and my forever friend HG the best of love and life. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2009 2:51:00 AM

Interesting. Sara The "Bible" says men sharpen each other as iron. I think this poetry soup sharpens us.

William Kershaw

Date: 7/10/2009 5:25:00 PM

Barbara, Your man it truly blessed. Less than 20 words to say so much. Excellenr writing. Always, Will

Michael Jordan

Date: 7/10/2009 10:00:00 AM

Barbara this is a wonderfully passionate poem - great job on this piece - God Bless, MJ

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/10/2009 9:47:00 AM

lucky man to have a romantic woman like you--beautiful love poem or love song;-)your friend charma

James Fraser

Date: 7/10/2009 7:35:00 AM

Beautiful Cinquain Barbara, hope you got to sleep last night>>James

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/10/2009 6:10:00 AM

My Dearest Barbeeg,Barbara, Thank -YOU My Mentor Carol Brown asked me If YOU really LOVE me Now I can tell herto read this Beautiful LOVE POEM Thank-YOU for YOUR LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER...HG