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For Ben

Hey there, brother this one is for you for all the times you’ve blamed me for the things I didn’t do hey there, brother this one is for you hey there, brother it’s been awhile I’d give you a great big hug but we both know that’s not your style hey there, brother it’s been awhile hey there, brother how have you been you haven’t invited me to hang with you lately just give me a call and tell me when hey there, brother how have you been hey there, brother you’re the best I’ll ever know you’ve showed me unconditional love and you’ve taught me how to grow hey there, brother you’re the best I’ll ever know hey there, brother this one is for you I love watching you move through life and can’t wait to see all the things you’ll do hey there, brother this one is for you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/30/2015 3:00:00 PM
- Thanks for your first great ode poem, Rachel - Welcome to P- Soup :) - A greeting from Norway & Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/29/2015 5:07:00 PM
Rachel, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/29/2015 3:44:00 PM
This is a great poem Rachel, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/29/2015 12:59:00 PM
Awesome write, Rachel. Brother's can be the best friend in the world sometimes. Good write. Keep it up....Sharon G.
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Date: 4/29/2015 12:03:00 PM
Hey Rachel, this is beautiful! ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle
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Date: 4/29/2015 8:03:00 AM
I hope your brother maneuvers the rough terrains of life.. 7+++!!!
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