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Footprints

On a frigid winter evening, so still that hot breath lingered around my face. In snow sparklingly dry and crystalline I encountered fresh-made footprints, leading off my mostly trodden path. The sun was low in evening's sky creating long dark spectral shadows that would all too soon be swallowed. But for a moment illumed the footprints in a strange, compelling light. A fleet chilling wind whisked around flurrying the fine, icy flakes, attempting to erase the marks. Against the will to forge ahead imprint the virgin snow, I turned; and followed the path the footsteps made. No further prints I saw upon the ground; no evidence of animal or other. Though in the distance I could hear, as darkness drew its shroud, the wailing of nocturnal beasts. Then deathly, eerie silence save for crying of the wind in tangled trees; as I was led through thickets coarse, and forests deepest gloomy dark, to end beneath an ancient misty lychgate. I stood beside a solitary grave one word; 'Father,' etched upon the stone. I glanced back from whence I came In snow sparklingly dry and crystalline; one single track of fresh-made footprints, illumed in strange, compelling light.

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Date: 4/6/2022 8:21:00 AM
Poignant, gripping write, Terry. A FAVE for me. Thanks, Gershon
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Date: 4/2/2022 6:53:00 PM
"Tangled trees ... Misty lychgate ... ' Father's" - this corner of earth we call England still births poets and artists. Shalom shalom, Anil Deo
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:05:00 AM
(Blushing) Thank you so much for your kind words Anil, much appreciated.
Date: 4/2/2022 8:25:00 AM
An intriguing and thought-provoking poem, Terry. Your imagery was excellent and writing skills obvious as you drew me into the meat of the poem. I'll be following your poetry. Thanks for sharing it with us, Bill
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/3/2022 2:06:00 AM
Thank you Bill for your too kind comments, Terry.
Date: 4/1/2022 10:20:00 PM
This was something I did not suspect "I stood beside a solitary grave one word; 'Father,' etched upon the stone." Such a writing talent you have!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:13:00 AM
You are far too kind Caren, but thank you so much.
Date: 3/31/2022 6:11:00 AM
Hi Terry, this is so frightening ! You have caught all of us in suspense. Those footprints stay in my mind as a big question mark!
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Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:14:00 AM
Hi Valsa, they do indeed, thank you for visiting.
Date: 3/29/2022 4:52:00 AM
Terry, what a haunting story ! The mood you created was just perfect and I felt that I was there! I really enjoyed reading this today, Happy Tuesday!!
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/31/2022 2:22:00 AM
Thank you, Mike, I always appreciate your comments.
Date: 3/28/2022 12:46:00 AM
Brilliantly written! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2022 1:50:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments
Date: 3/24/2022 11:36:00 AM
Hello Terry Miller, those are strange footprints in the snow. enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/28/2022 3:56:00 PM
Hello Terry footprints in the snow made by a mysteries way is a mystery. Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2022 1:52:00 AM
Thank you, Darlene, for your comments. I was hoping for a sense of mystery.

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