Footprints

On a frigid winter evening, so still
that hot breath lingered around my face.

In snow sparklingly dry and crystalline
I encountered fresh-made footprints,
leading off my mostly trodden path.

The sun was low in evening's sky
creating long dark spectral shadows
that would all too soon be swallowed.
But for a moment illumed the footprints 
in a strange, compelling light.

A fleet chilling wind whisked around
flurrying the fine, icy flakes,
attempting to erase the marks.

Against the will to forge ahead 
imprint the virgin snow, I turned;
and followed the path the footsteps made.

No further prints I saw upon the ground;
no evidence of animal or other.
Though in the distance I could hear,
as darkness drew its shroud,
the wailing of nocturnal beasts.

Then deathly, eerie silence save
for crying of the wind in tangled trees;
as I was led through thickets coarse,
and forests deepest gloomy dark,
to end beneath an ancient misty lychgate.

I stood beside a solitary grave
one word; 'Father,' etched upon the stone.

I glanced back from whence I came
In snow sparklingly dry and crystalline;
one single track of fresh-made footprints,
illumed in strange, compelling light.
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Wolf Avatar
April 6, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Poignant, gripping write, Terry. A FAVE for me. Thanks, Gershon
Deo Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 6:53 PM
"Tangled trees ... Misty lychgate ... ' Father's" - this corner of earth we call England still births poets and artists. Shalom shalom, Anil Deo
Miller Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 2:05 AM
(Blushing) Thank you so much for your kind words Anil, much appreciated.
Baker Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 8:25 AM
An intriguing and thought-provoking poem, Terry. Your imagery was excellent and writing skills obvious as you drew me into the meat of the poem. I'll be following your poetry. Thanks for sharing it with us, Bill
Miller Avatar
April 3, 2022 at 2:06 AM
Thank you Bill for your too kind comments, Terry.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 10:20 PM
This was something I did not suspect "I stood beside a solitary grave one word; 'Father,' etched upon the stone." Such a writing talent you have!
Miller Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 6:13 AM
You are far too kind Caren, but thank you so much.
George Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Hi Terry, this is so frightening ! You have caught all of us in suspense. Those footprints stay in my mind as a big question mark!
Miller Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 6:14 AM
Hi Valsa, they do indeed, thank you for visiting.
Gentile Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 4:52 AM
Terry, what a haunting story ! The mood you created was just perfect and I felt that I was there! I really enjoyed reading this today, Happy Tuesday!!
Miller Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 2:22 AM
Thank you, Mike, I always appreciate your comments.
Staton Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 12:46 AM
Brilliantly written! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem.
Miller Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:50 AM
Thank you so much for your kind comments
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 11:36 AM
Hello Terry Miller, those are strange footprints in the snow. enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 3:56 PM
Hello Terry footprints in the snow made by a mysteries way is a mystery. Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Miller Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 1:52 AM
Thank you, Darlene, for your comments. I was hoping for a sense of mystery.
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