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Footle-In the Mall

footfall

too small

businesslight verse

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2015 12:12:00 PM

Ha, Waiting on the Cowboys today... this game might be the smallest od them all... LINDA

Skat A

Date: 9/30/2013 8:27:00 AM

having fun reading your footles once again............SKAT

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 3/10/2009 10:00:00 AM

Yes Bria, too true. You should be over here, no better ....closed down.......my town. REgards: Déirdre

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/10/2009 4:59:00 AM

I finally understand this footle thing. I want to say thank you for constantly challenging us to learn new things and for the wonderful contest. Seeing all of the wonderful ones out there I would not want to have to judge this contest. You are gifted and with each new poem that I read I see that more and more. This one saddened me a bit but is very truthfully written. Thank you again for all that you do. Smiles from Lolita

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 3/9/2009 2:03:00 PM

sweet one..........u really got these footles going....Maryam

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/9/2009 11:26:00 AM

Thank you Brian. I will et you know when I get it! I look foward to its arrivail! Love, Robin

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/9/2009 10:51:00 AM

I'm not sure I get tis one, Brian, although it is funny picturing a bunch of boys throwng one around the mall! Love, Robin

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/9/2009 8:19:00 AM

This are addicting I must admit - God Bless, MJ

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/9/2009 7:55:00 AM

Our mall is 1/2 of what it used to be. Sad. Good one. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/9/2009 7:21:00 AM

A sign of our sad economic times....well done, Brian! ~ Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/9/2009 5:35:00 AM

Great one Brian! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/9/2009 4:35:00 AM

Very good one good brother..made me smile.

Arany P.

Date: 3/9/2009 2:06:00 AM

haha!! you are on the move aren't you?!?! and thank you for your lovely comments... those lines you picked in SPRING FEVER... were my fav too... i loved the tulip more!! thank you for your encouragement... and this footle contest... everyone's actually got their heads spinning around... i don't know how you are going to judge?!? what a quest... have a nice day!! ~ Arany

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