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footle-IN THE MALL

footfall too small

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/11/2015 12:12:00 PM
Ha, Waiting on the Cowboys today... this game might be the smallest od them all... LINDA
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Date: 12/19/2014 9:16:00 PM
Nice footle
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Date: 9/30/2013 8:27:00 AM
having fun reading your footles once again............SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2009 10:00:00 AM
Yes Bria, too true. You should be over here, no better ....closed down.......my town. REgards: Déirdre
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Date: 3/10/2009 4:59:00 AM
I finally understand this footle thing. I want to say thank you for constantly challenging us to learn new things and for the wonderful contest. Seeing all of the wonderful ones out there I would not want to have to judge this contest. You are gifted and with each new poem that I read I see that more and more. This one saddened me a bit but is very truthfully written. Thank you again for all that you do. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/9/2009 2:03:00 PM
sweet one..........u really got these footles going....Maryam
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Date: 3/9/2009 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Brian. I will et you know when I get it! I look foward to its arrivail! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/9/2009 10:51:00 AM
I'm not sure I get tis one, Brian, although it is funny picturing a bunch of boys throwng one around the mall! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/9/2009 8:19:00 AM
This are addicting I must admit - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/9/2009 7:55:00 AM
Our mall is 1/2 of what it used to be. Sad. Good one. BG
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Date: 3/9/2009 7:21:00 AM
A sign of our sad economic times....well done, Brian! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:35:00 AM
Great one Brian! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/9/2009 4:35:00 AM
Very good one good brother..made me smile.
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Date: 3/9/2009 2:06:00 AM
haha!! you are on the move aren't you?!?! and thank you for your lovely comments... those lines you picked in SPRING FEVER... were my fav too... i loved the tulip more!! thank you for your encouragement... and this footle contest... everyone's actually got their heads spinning around... i don't know how you are going to judge?!? what a quest... have a nice day!! ~ Arany
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