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Imagism poetry contest Sponsored by Constance LA France

     The cold fog rises from the meadow like smoke from Poppy's pipe...
... ever upward with the sweet savour of meadow grass. 
My bare feet, like mortar and pestle, smash out the green scent as I walk through the wet dew, chilled and sprinkled with drops of water. 
     Goosebumps chase each other up my legs to tender, pebbled breasts. I cross my arms for warmth and blow out a quivering cloud of warm breath. 
     Revealed now,  the rugged brown trunks of the trees surrounding me in the distance.
     They wave the fog away, as I've seen Mamaw do with Poppy's pipe smoke...
... with twisting limbs that sway in the breeze.

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Date: 10/13/2024 12:40:00 PM
I can almost smell Poppy's pipe
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/15/2024 9:05:00 AM
<3 ty! Xo
Date: 10/4/2024 9:13:00 AM
Love the last lines. i They help unite your thoughts
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/4/2024 10:21:00 AM
Thank you! Good review! Xo
Date: 10/1/2024 6:49:00 AM
Crystol, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, lovely poem, Constance
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Crystol Woods
Date: 10/4/2024 4:08:00 AM
Thank you Constance, this was a fun contest! Thank YOU for all your hard work and creative ideas! Xo
Date: 9/18/2024 9:18:00 AM
Great descriptions, Crystol! It stands alone, but yes, I do think it could be the beginning of a story.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/18/2024 10:39:00 AM
Shanksh sho mush David! Heehee xo
Date: 9/17/2024 8:57:00 AM
A way with words and images, Poetess. Haunting yet lovely; picturesque but poignant. :o))
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/17/2024 9:51:00 AM
Very good of you to say Arlo, thank you! Xoox
Date: 9/16/2024 8:17:00 AM
Dang! You are really upping your game these days. This is outstanding. I gotta believe this will be a contender
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/17/2024 9:51:00 AM
Yess I agree thanks!
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/16/2024 3:15:00 PM
I would leave it as is for the contest. You can always expand on it later.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/16/2024 2:49:00 PM
Seems like there should be more...a good beginning to a story maybe?
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Crystol Woods
Date: 9/16/2024 2:47:00 PM
Oh wow high praise indeed!! Thank you so much Tom, it means so much to me to read this from you who are so talented! Xoxo
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