Flying

Though moon may hide her fluid face,
and stars in silent sentence trace
the outline of my breath denied,
I’ll wing away on Eagle’s pride.

The gloomy dusk may gather in
eclipsing hues that should have been
a splintered rainbow deep inside
to wing away on Eagle’s pride.

When darkened tides swell at my shore
to drown the flame within my core
while waters rise on every side,
I’ll wing away on Eagle’s pride.

Though calloused hands close in on me
to seal my cell without a key
I’ll lull my heart and I’ll abide- 
I’ll wing away on Eagle’s pride.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Aye, the Eagle's pride as they glide over Glens on Alba's land. Your words allow me to picture those images Kris, lovely poetry....:)
Locksley Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 1:40 PM
You write very well in the Kyrielle form, Kris, and the images were very vivid. What an adventure it would be to soar above the earth like an eagle. Enjoyed your poem! Best to you, Diane
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 8:22 PM
Have a lovely Tuesday, Kris! Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 3:49 PM
Thanks for your comments, Kris. I'll be looking for new work from you! It was a pleasure to read this one again. Love, Carolyn
Tideswell Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Hi Kris, I'm so pleased to read another beautiful write of yours. Wonderful flow in this kyrielle. I've only tried this form once, but reading your super example makes me want to try another ~ Sharon :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 4:37 PM
HI, there, Kris. Yes, like Carolyn said, this is beautiful. I just love a kyrielle and your repeating line is awesome! Luv, Andrea
Devonshire Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 3:00 PM
Incredible Kyrielle, Kris. This is a tough form for me, but yours is thought-provoking and makes a lot of sense. Beautifully penned! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 9:00 AM
Wow-- what a marvelous write that just flows so well-- I've never tried this form Kris, but you sure make it look so effortless to write-- beautiful poem that soars... nikko :)
Mehta Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Very perfect Kyrielle enjoyed it, Kris
Palli Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 11:23 PM
Excellent write. Loved it.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 10:04 PM
Luv the Kyrielle form Kris and am going to attempt for one of the contests offered on Soup.. this is very well written and very visual luv.. enjoyed the creativity and the form.. happy weekend...
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