Fly To Me

Fly to me my love on the wings of hopes and dreams come and be my passion a lover's symphony Be my guiding star light show me all of nature's best come and be my pillow where my weary head can rest Take my hand and walk with me on life's ever winding road keep me safe and steady hold me in our home Let's sleep beside the moon tonight camp inside the corners of my heart be my one and only my desire, my trust, my start

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D. C.

Date: 5/14/2015 7:10:00 AM

Hi Tim..back from my vacation..Thanks! "Sleep beside the moon tonight and camp inside the corners of my heart.." That really got me! What a romantic!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/3/2015 3:21:00 PM

about time you make an anthology of romantic verses, tim... another gold!.. huggs

Vera Duggan

Date: 5/2/2015 1:16:00 AM

Ah Tim this is such a romantic poem, it makes romance sound alive and trust me it is, you either have a lady love or there is one out there waiting for you, it would be nice if you can find as much happiness as Peter and I have so take care my friend..........Vera...............

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 5/1/2015 3:44:00 PM

This is so beautiful and romantic that I'm sure the muse will show her appreciation...if the kids ever go to bed that is. Beautiful Write!!~janet

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/30/2015 5:27:00 PM

WOW! Tim, you sure know how to get the ladies' hearts to flutter... you romantic old dog!!! SWEET!!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/30/2015 5:35:00 PM

Will do........

Tim Smith
Date: 4/30/2015 5:29:00 PM

Thanks Jack....go wish sweet Charmaine a happy birthday on Cupids Arrow poem

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/30/2015 12:13:00 PM

Just for this alone, your ladylove can easily grow wings to fly to your side, Tim. Blessings to you and your beloved who can inspire such beautiful lines! Kim :)

Tim Smith
Date: 4/30/2015 12:32:00 PM

Thanks Kim....she is one special lady and I remind her of that everyday....you never know what tomorrow will bring

Jan Allison

Date: 4/30/2015 5:53:00 AM

so romantic Tim beautiful imagery :-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 4/30/2015 12:31:00 PM

Thanks Jan....it's not iambic pentameter but it's the best I can do....Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/30/2015 4:41:00 AM

It can't get more romantic than this to answer Arturo : ) below...So sooo beautiful. You will publish a book one day and fill each page with such beauties-Charma. Oops Another fav. Before I forget!

Tim Smith
Date: 4/30/2015 12:30:00 PM

Thank you sweet one....not sure about a book but you never know...hugs Tim

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/30/2015 12:47:00 AM

Just when I think, ok, how can a poem get any more romantic...................

Tim Smith
Date: 4/30/2015 12:10:00 PM

What can I say my friend... I think Charmaine summed it up.

Constance La France

Date: 4/29/2015 6:01:00 PM

Tim, this poem is so enchanting, alluring with deep love, I like your phrasing of words, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, A Day. . .

Tim Smith
Date: 4/30/2015 12:07:00 PM

Thank you very much BW..have a lovely day Tim