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Fluttering Fireflies

Please, do not imprison fireflies inside of jars, for they are the nearest we will ever be to stars. Quote by poet fluttering fireflies filigree flashes at dusk... fluorescent forest March 3, 2022 Constance La France's Haiku Contest H Forms - Traditional Nature Haiku checked with howmanysyllables

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2022 4:25:00 PM

so gorgeous!! Congrats on a well deserved top win.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/8/2022 9:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and picture. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 10:46:00 AM

Thanks for the congrats and well wishes, Paula.

Jeff Kyser

Date: 3/8/2022 8:56:00 AM

Nice imagery, Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 10:46:00 AM

Thank you, Jeff.

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2022 8:19:00 AM

Jenna, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku contest with your beautiful poem, I love your quote and the image also ~Constance

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/8/2022 10:46:00 AM

Thanks so very much for the honor, Constance.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/6/2022 5:45:00 AM

How beautiful! Congratulations!

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/6/2022 7:09:00 AM

Many thanks for the many comments you leave me, Kim. I'm neglectful in doing the same... so sorry.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/5/2022 5:20:00 PM

Jenna, this is stunning~Congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/6/2022 7:09:00 AM

Thank you so very much, Paulette.

John Lawless

Date: 3/4/2022 5:35:00 AM

Jenna, I remember seeing them aglow in my daughters Afro....

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/4/2022 6:19:00 AM

Oh what an angelic sight that must’ve been for you, John!!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/3/2022 3:24:00 PM

Lovely, especially 'fluorescent forest' - they are indeed like stars on earth, best wishes for the contest~

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/3/2022 3:27:00 PM

Thanks an awful lot for taking time to read me and leave kind comments, Michelle.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/3/2022 10:00:00 AM

Exceptionally nice, Jenna. I love your quote, too, although I was guilty of doing so when I was a youngster. Love the alliteration, as well. Good luck in the contest.

Jenna Logan
Date: 3/3/2022 3:26:00 PM

Even as a child, I was in awe of them. I haven't seen any in years... such is the shame. Little boys on the hunt... I understand that concept, having an older brother. Thank, Milt.