Flurries of Flakes

As Sol slips off of the Earth's edge, twilight slowly morphs into night. And Autumn colors disappear as dusk dims all remaining light. Wildlife shivers in frigid winds, contemplating the coming snow. And dusk smears the horizon red as crimson rivers ebb and flow. Hoar-frost clouds, like paper towels, expunge all traces of blue skies. And darkness darkens the heavens till the stars twinkle like fireflies. Squirrels gather up acorns to stash in final preparation. And flurries of flakes hail Winter in joyous anticipation. Fall's horn of Cornucopia gives way to empty fields of muck. And Autumn’s beauty slips away, much like the last migrating duck. (Quatrain) 9/15/2015
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Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Love these lines "And darkness deadens the heavens until the stars come out to play" and "And the fall colors disappear much like the last migrating duck."
Pinet Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Macfarlane Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 1:52 PM
Emile, this is excellent! You described the seasons changing expertly. Love the line : skeletal trees stripped naked, awesome! Congrats on a fine win! Hugs
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Thanks Cecilia, I appreciate your encouraging comments. Emile.
A  Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 11:13 AM
Emile, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT LOVE
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 11:47 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate your unwavering support. Emile.
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 10:59 AM
Wonderful use of the words and great technique..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Ebbs Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Great Job Emile, congrats on your win!!!
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Thanks Edward, I appreciate your support. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 11:44 PM
Wow that's so real and beautiful Emile! Masterful work n superb first place win! Big congrats!
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Upma, I appreciate your continued support and encouragement. Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 10:47 PM
Great poem! Descriptive, skillfully written Congratulations! Janice
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Tor Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Congratulations Emile! On your win!
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate it. Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 6:53 PM
stunning Emile a joy to read congrats on 1st hugs 7
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:18 PM
Thanks Shadow, it was fun to compete with so many talented poets. Emile.
Kimathi Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 6:03 PM
A very unique way of drawing attention to the poem's subject using different tones of ink. Congratulation for your WIN and unique verse Emile! ;-)
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Thanks Teddy, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Roper Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 5:39 PM
WoW!!! Good write, Emile.Congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:22 PM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Allison Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 4:25 PM
Many congrats Emile I can see why Shadow loved this so much :-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 3:55 PM
you did a superb job with the words. BIG congrats on an amazing win with this gem.
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:24 PM
Thanks Andrea, I appreciate your encouraging comments. Emile.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Emile, your dramatic poem sets the tone for the coming harsh winter. I think about the animals and how they adapt and how some freeze. I only lived where it snowed in my younger years yet with visits back to Kansas I know the difficulties, especially trying to drive in the snow and ice. Congratulations on your very deserving first place win Emile! #7
Pinet Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 7:25 PM
Thanks so much Connie, I appreciate your friendly comments. Emile.
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 6:19 AM
- Once again .... a great poem, Emile ..... Every season is beautiful in its own way - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:23 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Wigley Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 1:38 AM
A lovely depiction of the season's change, Emile. Good luck in the contest. Regards, Viv
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Thanks so much Viv, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Martin Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 10:52 PM
Liked your poem very much. Good seasonal. Good luck in contest!
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:24 AM
Thanks Thomas, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Laurie Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 8:44 PM
G'day Emile... a nice picture you have painted with words Emile - good luck - Lindsay
Pinet Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Thanks so much Lindsay, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Onclaud Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 3:37 PM
so visually rendered by your golden quill, emile... wow.. huggs!
Pinet Avatar
September 15, 2015 at 3:42 PM
Thanks so much Nette, I appreciate your support. Emile.
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