Fluffer-Nutters

When I was a child 
I loved marshmallows
so soft, so gooey and yummy
Oh I'd beam out of doors
when the birch stick bore
charred marshmallow goop
for my tummy!

When I was a child
I would go hog wild 
for peanut butter and fluff
all that white marshmallow
in which I'd wallow
my mouth all covered
in sticky stuff!

My Mom often spread
the white Fluff on bread
with peanut butter galore
And we'd bypass the meat
for this sticky treat
and scream for her to
buy much, much, more!

But you see Mom knew
that good food it's true
can make children strong unlike 
those sweet Fluffer-Nutters
so we had to contend
with the meat in the end
if we wanted that treat 
from our Mother!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/12/2012 10:31:00 AM
Glad to see this placed in the high top. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:49:00 PM
Very nice, Debbie. Congrats on your win in carol's contest.
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie. Another winner! Have a wonderful day. Jon
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Date: 2/10/2012 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie. I enjoyed your poem. Love, Maureen
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Date: 2/10/2012 1:57:00 AM
Debbie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 2/10/2012 1:36:00 AM
Lovely one congratualtions a well deserved win I love this xx
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Date: 2/9/2012 5:43:00 PM
Congrats, Deb. Excellent. Great job. Kudos. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/9/2012 5:01:00 PM
congrats Debbie on a magnificent first place win for this awesome write on fluff.. and oh that title is cool luv.. how are u doing? any news yet?
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Date: 2/9/2012 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Debbie, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/6/2012 8:22:00 AM
This is a nice memory of what mom did and those stay with you forever. Beautiful. love phyl
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Date: 2/5/2012 4:03:00 PM
Wise mom..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Those marshmallows are a treat to eat..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2012 2:43:00 PM
Enjoyed your trip along memory lane here Debbie, and i thank you for the placement you gave in your contest..
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Date: 2/5/2012 7:24:00 AM
Good and sweet memories Debbie,well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/5/2012 12:38:00 AM
Ohh shucks, now you have me wanting for some marshmallow treats! Sticky, gooey yummy fluff :D Loved your trip down sweet memory lane :) hugs :D
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Date: 2/4/2012 7:27:00 PM
I wish I had thought of this!! Oh, yum....I remember sticking my grimy little fingers into the jar when no one was looking!!! (Still have a sweet tooth!!)
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Date: 2/4/2012 6:18:00 PM
But I am sure the love in these fluffies made up for the lack of protein. Good luck with this cutie. Soup mail. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/4/2012 4:07:00 PM
Debbie, I had to check this one out because I wrote and submitted a poem about fluffernutters as well. Is this for the fluff contest? If it is, it looks like a contender.
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