Flowing Water

FLOWING    WATER

Though my boat be shaken and tossed,
Serenity is in the mind, in the soothed  soul --
My spirit’s not aching or forsaken.  Nor is it lost.
It needs no flow from smoothed shoal.

Not for me still waters, though they run deeply
In the placid pool behind a hinged lock-gate on a canal,
Or slowly with a meandering boat on the Mississippi.
I need contrast : this flowing peace is too banal.

Through a thunderstorm’s raging performance
And the torrent plunging itself to the abyss floor
Peace is in my mind : contrast between wild disturbance 
And mild tranquility is my key to the locked poetry door. 

Where the flowing tide consumes the sand,   
With the week’s hunger of a wolf without balm,
And hurls it about as a carcass of land  --
In this ocean storm with wave merciless, I feel only calm.

When the tumultuous shrieking wind and wave break 
And spend  themselves urgently on the silent sandy slope,
The tumblers of my locked imagination shake 
Open, and I feel the lull and pull of peace and hope.

A child in a warm bed listens to the windy rain on pane
And feels the same catalysis : and, peeping  at the driven rivulets,
Sees storms and hears the cries of lost sailors on the main,
And falls to sleep contented, secure beneath the coverlets.

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Written  by  Sydney  Peck on   24  September 2011
For  Francine  Roberts’s   Contest   “Flowing water”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Valmiki Avatar
October 8, 2011 at 6:17 AM
nice work
Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Syd. Love, Carol
Gorelick Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 9:23 PM
Sorry I'm so late with congrats..A big win and well deserved..I read it several times and it gets better each time. BG
Atry Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Brilliant and alluring imagery evoked by painterly words. A well deseved win. Cobgratulations. Brenda
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:24 AM
Congratulations on the first place win. Well done. Very nice poem. Lee
Quigley Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:01 AM
Very nice Sydney. Congratulations
Macmillan Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:47 PM
:-0 OH WOW.... again, oh wow!!! Sydney, I don't read enough of the postings, apparently. Missed this. THIS IS AWESOME. Sometimes, I can 'smell' out a poem's creation (think I did this with Andrea once). I sense this was not a struggle to write, that you didn't crumple page and nibble at a pen, or tap your fingers on a desk. I feel this just flowed from you (no pun). Am I right? Did this feel like automatic writing, poured out? It is MAW! PERFECTO. Deserving of 1st. Cyndi
Merryman Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:28 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Sydney! Kim
Johnson Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:11 PM
lWonderful writing and wonderful win. Congratulations, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 10:44 PM
congrats on your first place win in the contest Syd ( sheesh , people are going to start thinking you're paying me)
Beck Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 3:59 AM
was the fifty bucks enough by the way??
Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 2:57 PM
Great work for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest...Sara
Jones Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 1:44 PM
Wow, wow, WOW Syd! "Not for me still waters".."torrent plunging itself to the abyss floor".."the week’s hunger of a wolf without balm"... and more and more... Jam-packed awesome write! Tyvm for sharing. Beauty day, namaste~N
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