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Flowing Water

FLOWING WATER Though my boat be shaken and tossed, Serenity is in the mind, in the soothed soul -- My spirit’s not aching or forsaken. Nor is it lost. It needs no flow from smoothed shoal. Not for me still waters, though they run deeply In the placid pool behind a hinged lock-gate on a canal, Or slowly with a meandering boat on the Mississippi. I need contrast : this flowing peace is too banal. Through a thunderstorm’s raging performance And the torrent plunging itself to the abyss floor Peace is in my mind : contrast between wild disturbance And mild tranquility is my key to the locked poetry door. Where the flowing tide consumes the sand, With the week’s hunger of a wolf without balm, And hurls it about as a carcass of land -- In this ocean storm with wave merciless, I feel only calm. When the tumultuous shrieking wind and wave break And spend themselves urgently on the silent sandy slope, The tumblers of my locked imagination shake Open, and I feel the lull and pull of peace and hope. A child in a warm bed listens to the windy rain on pane And feels the same catalysis : and, peeping at the driven rivulets, Sees storms and hears the cries of lost sailors on the main, And falls to sleep contented, secure beneath the coverlets. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck on 24 September 2011 For Francine Roberts’s Contest “Flowing water”

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Date: 10/8/2011 6:17:00 AM
nice work
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Date: 10/3/2011 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Flowing Water" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 9:23:00 PM
Sorry I'm so late with congrats..A big win and well deserved..I read it several times and it gets better each time. BG
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Date: 10/1/2011 8:42:00 PM
Brilliant and alluring imagery evoked by painterly words. A well deseved win. Cobgratulations. Brenda
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:24:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win. Well done. Very nice poem. Lee
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:01:00 AM
Very nice Sydney. Congratulations
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:47:00 PM
:-0 OH WOW.... again, oh wow!!! Sydney, I don't read enough of the postings, apparently. Missed this. THIS IS AWESOME. Sometimes, I can 'smell' out a poem's creation (think I did this with Andrea once). I sense this was not a struggle to write, that you didn't crumple page and nibble at a pen, or tap your fingers on a desk. I feel this just flowed from you (no pun). Am I right? Did this feel like automatic writing, poured out? It is MAW! PERFECTO. Deserving of 1st. Cyndi
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:28:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Sydney! Kim
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:11:00 PM
lWonderful writing and wonderful win. Congratulations, Joyce
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Date: 9/30/2011 10:44:00 PM
congrats on your first place win in the contest Syd ( sheesh , people are going to start thinking you're paying me)
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Sidney Beck
Date: 10/1/2011 3:59:00 AM
was the fifty bucks enough by the way??
Date: 9/24/2011 2:57:00 PM
Great work for the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Good luck in the contest...Sara
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Date: 9/24/2011 1:44:00 PM
Wow, wow, WOW Syd! "Not for me still waters".."torrent plunging itself to the abyss floor".."the week’s hunger of a wolf without balm"... and more and more... Jam-packed awesome write! Tyvm for sharing. Beauty day, namaste~N
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