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summertime flowers sit in the pretty garden smiling to the bees

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Maria Fernandez-Garcia

Date: 7/3/2024 1:34:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, as well as imagery,. Congratulations on the winning contest. My love/María

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2024 9:05:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be a Beautiful haiku write. It was fun to bring to life. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2024 9:43:00 AM

Cute imagery. Congrats, dear

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2024 9:03:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/3/2024 8:18:00 AM

"1 Place" flowers ~ Date Written: 6/26/2024

Terry Miller

Date: 7/3/2024 3:44:00 AM

Oh, so wonderful, congratulations

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2024 8:18:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be a wonderful haiku write. I enjoyed writing this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2024 10:05:00 PM

from now, whenever i see a flower I hear your words, 'smiling to the bees' what an amazing thought dear poet. Be Blessed. happy writing, Congratulations on your win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2024 8:16:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "flowers" Haiku write. I love flowers, pink roses the best. They do bring love/joy to us & to the bees above.... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Valsa George

Date: 7/2/2024 9:13:00 PM

This is a sweet haiku on smiling flowers. Congratulations dear Paula on your great win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2024 8:13:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be a sweet haiku write. I love flowers. They bring us love/joy...Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 7/2/2024 5:47:00 PM

Congratulations, Dear Paula, on your first place win. Enchanting!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2024 8:11:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be an Enchanting haiku write. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/2/2024 4:19:00 PM

Paula, congratulations on your first place win, this is so sweet, it made me smile.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2024 8:10:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your Congratulations. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "flowers" Haiku write & it gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles. I enjoyed writing this one for your wonderful contest. Thanks for having the contest & for my wonderful placement. "Smile" Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/1/2024 9:24:00 AM

Love your summer Haiku Paula: Reminds me of my fairy garden at the moment. Bright red impatiens and deep blue Lobelia. Thanks for a lovely read. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/1/2024 11:18:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you Love my fun summer Haiku "flowers" write. I love flowers. Your flowers sound so pretty. Just an idea. How about a picture & write??? Flowers make a day pretty... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Christina Bowring

Date: 6/28/2024 11:36:00 PM

Dear Paula, such a gorgeous haiku. Beautiful imagery so skilfully created. I too love the last line especially. A summer treat to read today. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and smiles :):)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:15:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be a gorgeous haiku write. Your kinds words put a smile on my heart. Thanks... Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2024 10:49:00 AM

The last line is adorable

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:13:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you found my last line to be adorable. Yes, flowers are smiling to the bees. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Tonye George

Date: 6/28/2024 10:48:00 AM

Flowers are a great deal to us and some animals. It feeds us all. To humans, it's scent, warmth, love and muse. To bees, its juices make them strong. And to birds? Maybe a stage to perch and display.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:10:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "flowers" Haiku write. I love flowers. They do bring love/joy to us.... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Jan Allison

Date: 6/28/2024 9:54:00 AM

aww this is so cute, i love that final line too Paula:-) hugs jan xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:09:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be so cute. I loved writing this one. Hugs... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Valsa George

Date: 6/27/2024 11:17:00 PM

More than any other season, summer is the time when gardens are decked with flowers and bees swarm in. A lovely haiku, dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/30/2024 8:07:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be A lovely haiku write. Summer/gardens/bees just all go together. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/27/2024 11:16:00 AM

very good Haiku Paula hugs Shadow

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:08:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "flowers" Haiku write. I enjoyed bringing it to life... Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/27/2024 8:46:00 AM

I'll bet the bees smile back. This poem sings to beauty

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:08:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "flowers" write. Oh yes, the bees did smile back to the flowers. "Smile" Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/26/2024 6:54:00 PM

Aw, this one brings a wide smile to my face, Paula. So sweet!! Thanks, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/27/2024 1:04:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be So sweet with a wide smile. I love to give out smiles. Did you know they are Free??? "Smile" Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Lin Lane

Date: 6/26/2024 7:54:00 AM

as if they smile to invite the pollen seekers. Lovely, Paula.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/28/2024 9:54:00 AM

what a sweet sentiment Lin x

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/26/2024 10:07:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Great to see you. Glad you found this to be a Lovely write. Yes, the pretty flowers smile to invite the pollen seekers/bees. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away..............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/26/2024 7:46:00 AM

flowers ~ Date Written: 6/26/2024