Flower Bud In the Garden

A young bud, I’m awakened by Bells of Ireland
and a magnificent Morning Glory,
Baby’s Breath and Freesia near my cheek.
Larkspur and Delphinium happily look on
as blissfully I sun myself throughout the morn
surrounded by an ever-present bright array of beauty!

Enchantingly time passes as I take notice of
Lavender’s allure and the grace of Queen of Lace;
the charm of Jonquille, Jasmine, and Gardenia.
Pansy, Tulip, Peony, and Petunia want to play,
swaying gleefully with Buttercup and fellow Gladiola.
Periwinkle seems to wink at me
as I sneak a peek at pretty Primrose in repose.
However, when sweet Violet I spy,
she always shrinks so shyly from my gaze.

I’m cheered by Chrysanthemum and yellow Daffodil.
Marigold and Sunflower never fail to make me smile;
Magnolia and Myrtle nod hello to me
and Forget-me-not reminds me she is there!
Through the whole sweet afternoon,
fair Lilac’s scent permeates the air.

Soon enough Sun bids us all Adieu.
I then see white against the fading light -
Iris, Lily, Narcissus, Limonium and Rose.
Inhaling Orchid’s heady fragrance through the night,
I slumber in tranquility, wondering in dreams. . . 
what flower I’ll be blossoming into!


For SandyIvy's  "My own little Garden" Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/5/2013 7:47:00 PM
Hola Andrea, this is a nice winning poem. Congratulations with the awesome view of your own little Garden poem in Sandyivy's contest. God bless~Linda
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Date: 4/4/2013 5:08:00 PM
Andrea congratulations on your wonderful win...Donna
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Date: 4/3/2013 12:48:00 PM
Way to go on the contest. Definitely a blooming good job!
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Date: 4/3/2013 12:33:00 PM
Another splendid write......each time a winner!! Well done, Andrea!
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Date: 4/3/2013 11:11:00 AM
Nice to see the list of lovely blooms. congrats..your great! BG
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Date: 4/3/2013 7:14:00 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 4/3/2013 5:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andrea...your garden sounds beautiful! ....I like the violet best!
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Date: 4/3/2013 2:45:00 AM
Great write I loved it...Seren
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Date: 4/2/2013 11:03:00 PM
HI Andrea: How lovely ..perhaps she'll be a violet. Congratulations on your win and yourcreative garden poem, SuZ
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Date: 4/2/2013 10:44:00 PM
Lovely flower bud. Congrats for the awesome win.
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Date: 4/2/2013 9:42:00 PM
Thank you' SandyIvy
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Date: 3/17/2011 4:26:00 AM
OK guess I goofed Andrea.. what does he mean montague meltdown??? I understood mortgage meltdown.. wrote it at 2 a.m so expect mistake by that hour of morning .. can u explain please?
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Date: 2/22/2011 7:57:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Flowers". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:42:00 AM
Wow Andrea, beautiful poem:)))
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Date: 2/5/2011 12:09:00 PM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's "Flower" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/1/2011 7:16:00 AM
sparkling gem of a piece, andrea! all flowers await you...congrats on the big win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:42:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your first place win in the Flowers contest with this exciting entry my friend.. lovely as always... just arrived home to snow and ice and cold.. but..it is February and Spring must be near luv..
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Date: 2/1/2011 3:12:00 AM
congratulations on your 1st place win - I like the rhymes within the lines in this one
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Date: 1/31/2011 10:38:00 PM
Your garden is full of early spring, summer and fall. Lovely. Congratulations o your big win. Love, joyce
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:41:00 PM
Wow, what descriptiveness! No wonder your entry won big in Francine's contest. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:37:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, on this nice work. RAY
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Date: 1/31/2011 7:50:00 PM
This sure was a winner Andrea.Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 1/31/2011 7:22:00 PM
Loving the personifcation of each flower...just delightful, Andrea!! congrats on your 1st!!
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:22:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Andrea
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:14:00 PM
Congrads on your big win, Andrea!
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