Flock Without a Shepherd

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The weary Shepherd of a benighted flock
                has been cast into outer darkness;
                      languishing in a purgatory 
                           of his own making.

                 And those flock of sheep are now
         running amok, plaintively bleating "baa! baa!"
          into the abyss. Trying but failing to regroup;
   chin-stroking about who they're now supposed to be 

        Oh, what to do! They can't seem to figure out 
     what to do with themselves anymore, pathetically 
      desperate enough to go down the primrose path of
 self-destruction with the false prophet that once LED them.

 Now they're crestfallen about the glory they once knew.
         Instead of throwing off the yoke of servitude,
       they've chosen to come under it, like old times.
Exhibit A: of the whole bunch, the most dyed-in-the-wool

           sheep made a trip to Florida, headed down 
      his old Shepherd's abode, genuflecting before him;
                  on his hands and knees, pleading
                         to be led, like old times.


*example for contest*
Date written: 01/30/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/6/2021 8:40:00 PM
"Satire is tragedy plus time." - Lenny Bruce, I think you capture this beautifully with your piece. It hasn't been much time, but I hope we can continue to find some humor in the tragedy of the sheep and their Shepherd.
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Date: 3/6/2021 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Jessica:-) I love Lenny Bruce!
Date: 3/1/2021 12:01:00 PM
WOW! The false profit leading the sheep to the slaughter. This is BRILLIANT!
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Date: 3/1/2021 2:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine:-) I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 3/1/2021 9:52:00 AM
I must be really getting old, people, in general, seem to become stupid, unable to think for themselves, losing common sense, forgetting history and its lessons. hearing but not listening to the bully pulpit, the poor me syndrome, helpless and no longer leading, only following without perspective. Well played.
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Date: 3/1/2021 2:17:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful visit and feedback, DM:-)
Date: 2/24/2021 7:38:00 AM
How does the Good Shepherd look upon us. When we choose love over hate. We don’t disguise it by picking and choosing, pulling the wool over our eyes. God is merciful, kind and also the judge. Much of what the world is about today is hate. God says the world will call good bad, and bad good. This is what we see. Let there be revival and let God’s will be done on earth as it is in heaven.
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Date: 2/24/2021 1:47:00 PM
Thanks for the enlightening comments and visit, Kim:-)
Date: 2/23/2021 9:41:00 AM
That is pause for thought.
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Date: 2/23/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, Miranda:-)
Date: 2/21/2021 1:56:00 PM
Sounds like a sheep I know named Lindsay Graham! I guess politicians are cozying up to the lost shepherd because he's raised so much campaign money and they want a slice. Very well written, Edward. A poem for my personal faves! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 2/21/2021 2:13:00 PM
He's the most sycophantic "ReTrumplican" sheep in Washington, for sure. Thanks for the FAV, Carolyn:-)
Date: 2/21/2021 8:27:00 AM
Very biting satire indeed, Edward! thanks for the example. I hope I can come up with something;however, I don't think mine would be a popular topic.
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Date: 2/21/2021 1:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea. It's satire, my friend, so make it burn! The more biting the better, actually. Have at it!:-)
Date: 2/19/2021 6:29:00 AM
fabulous example! will be hard to beat!
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Date: 2/19/2021 6:55:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback and visit, Krish:-) I'm your entry poem will be as good if not better!
Date: 2/13/2021 8:14:00 AM
Edward, your poem is so wonderful and of course we know who it is without you having said it, great allusion, this is a good example for your contest and I truly hope I can pen you something worthy _Constance
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Date: 2/13/2021 9:02:00 AM
I'm sure you'll come up with a gem, Constance:-) Looking forward to reading your entry!
Date: 2/13/2021 4:50:00 AM
Your allusion is amazing, Edward. A stellar piece, satire included. Your words for a specific clientele perhaps invite an equally credible counterpiece. You've inspired me with a possible title: "Listen, the Senate Hears" - the politics of today. I enjoyed your write.
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Date: 2/13/2021 5:27:00 AM
Thank you so much, Reason A.:-)
Date: 2/13/2021 4:34:00 AM
Brilliant poem of allusion Edward, but no illusion here, speaks for itself, so much better without naming the target, cheers David
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Date: 2/13/2021 5:26:00 AM
Thank you very much, David:-)
Date: 1/31/2021 12:26:00 PM
Interesting work. I get the metaphors written within. Sara
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Date: 1/31/2021 12:44:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-) Glad you liked this satirical piece of mine! Have a blessed day, my friend.
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