FLOAT

Rise above Float free Beyond the clouds Devoid of negativity Eyes closed gently Drifting soft and slow Absorbing the calm tranquility Anxiety let go Bathe in the warmth Of the sweet smiling sun Float ….breathe slowly Bleakness be gone Float….be only in the moment Release your whole being of woe Inhale peace and pure air Eyes closed….float and just let go!

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/27/2024 12:35:00 PM

Hi Deb congratulations my friend on the honor awarded to you today, of POTD. I would love to do as you say, what an intense freeing of body from mind of peace from anxiety, just to float and go. Wonderful write. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:24:00 AM

Thankyou so much Jennifer….Debx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/22/2024 9:30:00 AM

Guess I missed the boat on this float. Congrats on POTD, Deb!

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:17:00 AM

Thankyou so much BB….Debx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/22/2024 5:42:00 AM

Great sentiments, Deb! So peaceful! Congratulations on POTD!

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:23:00 AM

Thankyou so much Kim….Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 3/21/2024 7:01:00 PM

Congrats on the POTD sister Deb. Well deserved indeed.

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:17:00 AM

Thankyou so much Jerry….Debx

Stephan McBride

Date: 3/21/2024 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD, beautiful poem of serenity and peace: )

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:23:00 AM

Thankyou so much Stephen….Debx

Bill Baker

Date: 3/20/2024 9:26:00 PM

Love the poem, Deb, great advice! Congratulations on your POTD honor, my dear friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:22:00 AM

Thankyou so much Bill…Debx

Don Iannone

Date: 3/20/2024 9:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Deb. How wonderful. "Float" is a soothing mantra for releasing burdens and embracing serenity, painting a picture of ascension into peace and light. It's a gentle reminder of the power within us to transcend the shadows of anxiety, inviting a profound sense of calm and renewal. Best wishes, Don

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:22:00 AM

Thankyou so much Don….Debx

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/20/2024 8:47:00 PM

Hello Deb… Congratulations on getting poem of the day. I found a white and very inspiring. Thank you so much.. Pangie xx

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:18:00 AM

Thankyou so much Pangie….Debx

Michael Tor

Date: 3/20/2024 7:16:00 PM

Congratulations Deb this was so soothing to read. Thanks for sharing and big Congratulations for receiving POTD...

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:17:00 AM

Thankyou so much Michael…Debx

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/20/2024 5:44:00 PM

Dear Deb, indeed, "float and just let go!" Your meditative poem is beautiful and soothing.. like a poetic lullaby. So inspiring! Congratulations for your exquisite poem being honored with POTD. A well-deserved distinction and a very worthy choice! Warmest wishes my dear poetry friend.. ~Susan

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:16:00 AM

Thankyou much Susan…..Debx

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/20/2024 4:34:00 PM

Hi Deb, Congratulations on this very serene POTD. It's like a visual meditation. Enjoy your honor!

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:16:00 AM

Thankyou so much Nancy…Debx

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/20/2024 2:47:00 PM

I'm back with delighted congratulations on POTD, Deb. Hugs ;)

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:15:00 AM

Thankyou much Evelyn….Debx

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/20/2024 2:35:00 PM

Congratulations young lady on POTD honors for this peaceful poem. Great to see your work honored. Hoping you are well:)

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:15:00 AM

Thankyou so much YM…Debx

Joseph May

Date: 3/20/2024 12:01:00 PM

I like the feeling of serenity in this lovely write, Congrats on POTD Deb

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:14:00 AM

Thankyou so much Joseph…Debx

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/20/2024 10:56:00 AM

Ah, how peaceful that would be. Congrats on POTD, Deb.

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:12:00 AM

Thankyou so much Jim…Debx

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 3/20/2024 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on "Float" recognized as the POTD! I enjoyed it the first time I read it....and happy to revisit it here today! Kudos! Paulette

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:11:00 AM

Thankyou so much Paulette….Debx

David Kavanagh

Date: 3/20/2024 10:02:00 AM

Drift off into the serenity of our universe at one with nature, congratulations on your most calming POTD Deb, cheers David

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:11:00 AM

Thankyou so much David….Debx

Arlo Parker

Date: 3/20/2024 9:23:00 AM

Zensational POTD. Any floating moment can be bliss. :-]

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:11:00 AM

Thankyou so much Arlo…Debx

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/20/2024 9:10:00 AM

In the clouds is the place to be, if you want to avoid negativity. In fact, it's the perfect environment to embrace tranquility. * That's where I linger most of the time. * Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. This is beautiful and uplifting, all at the same time. Congratulations Deb, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:10:00 AM

Thankyou so much Brandy….Debx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/20/2024 8:47:00 AM

It feels very fantastic. It's a spiritual feeling. It's a divine feeling. Floating frees us from every fear. Grand writing. Congratulations!

Deb M
Date: 4/22/2024 12:10:00 AM

Thankyou so much Alex….Debx