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Flight of Watermelon Fantasy
How I wish I could ride a bicycle I never could and doubt I ever would Twas being afraid to ride on the road Yet something inside told me that I should. One night when I was in bed sound asleep A fairy came and this is what she said Come with me I have a surprise for you I did as she said and rose from my bed. By my hand the fairy led me outside Was scared and exited at the same time There stood a bicycle waiting for me With watermelon wheels, frame painted lime. The fairy told me the special bike flies And that she would be flying by my side I sat on the saddle, the bike took flight Into the night on a magical ride. We flew past the man in moon, he is huge He looked pleased to greet us, his face did beam Asked for a slice of watermelon wheel We refused for we would be out of steam. The moon changed his tune, told us to fly off Then through the stars up we flew heaven bound Star gazing was truly captivating Angel voices being the only sound. Then the fairy said our dream time was up Was sad for I'd had a wonderful night We had to fly back to earth to awake From my fantasy watermelon flight.
5th July 2022
*+*+* A Watermelon Fantasy Ride To Feed My Imagination Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 7/19/2022 7:20:00 AM
You really managed to summarize all of the enchantment in just one stunning poem. Congratulations, dear Belle, on your well-deserved win, blessings, and best regards dear Belle.
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Date: 7/16/2022 4:39:00 PM
Great entry for the contest, Belle. Reads like a winner to me my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 7/15/2022 2:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Fun" write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
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Date: 7/15/2022 4:38:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this.... making me imagine riding with you... God bless you.
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Date: 7/14/2022 11:17:00 AM
Congrats on your 3rd place in dear Belle, you have all the magic wrapped in one beautiful poem here. You appeal to my sense of fantasy thank you for joining my contest.
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Date: 7/14/2022 1:30:00 AM
A whimsical gem of of a poem that you created Belle, know it will do well in the contest, - that is what dreams are all about, they are magic, we can do anything or be anyone. A fave. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/6/2022 3:27:00 PM
Delightful …..Belle Best wishes, Panagiota
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Date: 7/5/2022 6:36:00 PM
A lot of fun!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/5/2022 6:43:00 PM
Thank you Kim very much… Belle
Date: 7/5/2022 5:05:00 PM
Oh, I love this, how the fairy comes into the story. A great fantasy for the contest...this certainly is a winner! Best of luck!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/5/2022 6:35:00 PM
Thank you Anaya, I do like to write fantasy poems and enjoyed the challenge of this contest, win or lose contests inspire one’s muse… Belle
Date: 7/5/2022 7:17:00 AM
Wow this is so good, Belle, the story is wonderful. sure for a win. good luck.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/5/2022 10:16:00 AM
Thank you very much Harry, it was fun to write about a bike with watermelon wheels, that’s what I like about contests they bring the muse out to play… Belle
Date: 7/5/2022 12:36:00 AM
Great fantasy. I would probably eat the watermelon. :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/5/2022 3:52:00 AM
I think I would too Victor . Thank you, Belle :)
Date: 7/5/2022 12:02:00 AM
Oh so adorable. Love it. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 7/5/2022 3:51:00 AM
Thank you Gina. God bless you too dear friend. Love Belle

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