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_________________________ she always sings love each morning as the spring sun warms her gracious heart above the hills soft shadow her destiny soars beyond......... _________________________ Contest "Wow me in 5 lines" Poet ~ Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/26/2011 8:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win ^Rick in Francine's contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2011 8:15:00 AM

This indeed, wows the eyes of the reader with such beauty!! I feel my mind soaring..... Congratulations Rick!!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/24/2011 5:33:00 AM

Beautiful tanka-Wow! Congrats!! Happy Easter, Rick! Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2011 12:14:00 AM

sounds like one of those kids on American Idol or something. I really like this one. Glad to see it now and on the winners' list.

John Freeman

Date: 4/23/2011 9:51:00 PM

Great to see you in the winner's circle Rick. Congratulations on your honored place. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/23/2011 7:27:00 PM

Very melodious. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/23/2011 7:02:00 PM

Awesome image Rick.. Congratulations to you

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/23/2011 6:24:00 PM

congrats Rick on your 10th place win in the Wow Me contest, this is a lovely tanka

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2011 7:02:00 AM

Splendid visual with full vibrancy Rick .. an amazing entry ..good luck my friend.. wishing u the most blessed and wonderfully Happy Easter celebration luv... adoring the Risen Christ...

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/19/2011 9:41:00 PM

Wow Rick, this is magnificient.

Deb Wilson

Date: 4/19/2011 9:26:00 PM

oh how lovely Rick! Simple and eloquent...love,Deb