Chris Matt Poet Limerick

Flaws Versus Flawless

Flawless
Photo shopping a model.
So her neck doesn't have a wattle.
She's perfect after this, 
so her feet you will kiss.
Then return to your baby bottle.



Flaws
To the eyes I am a little rough.
In my stomach, I do have a fluff.
Wish you could see who I am.
Writing again my own slam.
For you, I see I wasn't the right stuff   



For S K A T's contest.

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 23, 2011 at 5:19 AM A belated congratulations on your placement Chris, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich February 6, 2011 at 3:59 PM I like this, Chris. Glad to see it in the winners' circle. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser February 5, 2011 at 4:56 AM Many congratulations Chris on your win in pd's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)

Poet Destroyer A February 4, 2011 at 10:32 PM CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.

Joyce Johnson February 4, 2011 at 7:03 PM Copngratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick February 4, 2011 at 4:36 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Robert Pettit February 4, 2011 at 4:24 PM Congratulations on your win. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in these two limericks.

Kory Calhoun February 4, 2011 at 11:28 AM Hi Chris - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC

Ralph Taylor February 4, 2011 at 11:00 AM Congrats on a well deserved win, Chris. Nice going. Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta February 4, 2011 at 10:06 AM Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Chris

Elaine George February 4, 2011 at 8:25 AM Good one! Congrats on your big win, Chris, Lainie.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 4, 2011 at 6:42 AM Congrats Chris on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write .. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..

Deb Radke February 4, 2011 at 6:36 AM Oh, good, good writing. Congratulations on this 'honestly' rendered work. Best wishes. Deb

Skat A February 4, 2011 at 12:20 AM CHRIS~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat

Carol Sunshine Brown January 19, 2011 at 4:29 AM I am reading such amazing poetry this morning Chris. I am glad yours is among the ones I have had the pleasure to read today. I wish you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol