Flawless and Flawed

Flawless
Down in Florida on the twenty-ninth of May,
the Phillies had a pitcher named Roy Halladay.

There was a show in store for Phillies fans in town.
In each inning, three came up and three went down.

In this one game during a pennant chase,
not one Florida Marlin could reach first base.

The only run scored on an error by Cameron Maybin.
However, that was all the Phils needed to win.

When it was all over, Roy pitched a perfect game.
There is no better way for a pitcher to achieve fame.



Flawed
A Major League team that used to be in Montreal,
is now in Washington, DC playing the game of baseball.

In the nation’s capital, they are again playing the game.
The “Nationals” is this baseball team’s name.

They have poor hitting, lousy pitching, and make errors by the score.
As a team goes, they are the same as they were before.

To see where they stand, they need a periscope.
The team is in bad shape will little immediate hope.

The Nats have given their fans little to cheer for each season.
Their annual dismal performance is the paramount reason.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
February 23, 2011 at 5:17 AM
A belated congratulations on your placement Robert, in the contest "Flawless vs' Flaws" sponsored by SKAT*. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 3:57 PM
hmmm, I looked to see and I had not commented on this yet, so it must be someone else I am remembering that also did a sports one on this topic.I think you did a great job with this entry. Congraulations to you.LUv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 4:49 AM
Many congratulations Robert on your win in pd's contest. Och I wish I knew more about American Football. Have a lovely weekend....:)
A   Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:31 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! ;-) Robert~on your awesome win, sure enjoyed.. have a wonderful one,..p.d.
Johnson Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 7:00 PM
You know how to rate baseball teams it seems. Congratulations on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Richards Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 12:20 PM
So glad to see your poem in the winners' circle,!! What wonderful examples to use for the flawed/flawless....baseball!! Congratulations! love Carrie
Calhoun Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 11:26 AM
Hi Robert - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in SKAT'S contest. Best wishes, KC
Taylor Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:58 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Bob. Nice going. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Robert
George   Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 8:22 AM
Enjoy your well deserved win, Robert. Lainie
Mannan Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Good one .Many congratulations for this top win.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Congrats Robert my friend on your winning poem in Irma's contest with this wonderful write luv.. enjoy another top spot for a top notch poem..luv..
Radke Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 6:34 AM
Great analogy of 'flawed' and 'flawless', Robert. Congratulations on your winning position in the contest. Love, Deb
A  Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ROBERT~Congratulations on your win~ thanks for the support* Skat
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