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Flashing Lights

The flashing lights that he had seen Were changing colour: red to green. In awe, he watched it high above. It stood for peace; it came in love. He saw it land and rushed to greet The beings he was first to meet. An open doorway; light inside; Out stepped his wife. ‘Oh, Jane,’ he cried; With outstretched arms, he ran to kiss The one he’d lost; he felt such bliss. He looked up into loving eyes; She slashed his throat, to his surprise. He died in wonder, asking why. She dumped his body, emptied dry. A couple mourning for their boy; But then they saw him – oh, the joy. He took their blood; and changed again: It reads our minds and sees our pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/11/2012 7:42:00 AM
I am stopping by to thank you for sharing your poetry with us Jack. I would also like to thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/30/2011 8:24:00 PM
Very eerie write Jack, I love this.
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Date: 12/28/2011 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2011 9:38:00 PM
This is grrrrrreat, Jack..it reminds me of the eerie Halloweeeen poem you wrote for a contest this yr. You got SOME KIND OF IMAGINATION,,,,and it's swell!! Don't ever keep intermingling the dark side...the Darth's of PS need your energy...ha ha. With Love, Merry Holidays, Gwendolen
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:52:00 PM
I remember this dark poem of yours. Congratulations. VEry unique in the contest!
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Date: 12/27/2011 5:33:00 PM
Jack what dark ink from your pen. Held my interest and was a surprise. Congratualtions on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/27/2011 3:29:00 PM
Dark...dark and yet I could not let that dissuade me from giving it the create it is due for the power of the write...and after all there would be NO LIGHT without darkness CONGRAD's Light & Love
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Date: 12/21/2011 3:14:00 PM
Yikes, Interesting story Jack, and very nicely done with excellent flow, made my hairs on the back of my neck stand up.
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Date: 12/21/2011 9:41:00 AM
Wow, what an interesting, clever verse. Lots of "alien" mystery in this. Have a wonderful Christmas my friend! :)
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Date: 12/21/2011 6:51:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jack. Wishing you a New Year filled with inspiration and the best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2011 7:08:00 PM
Now those are some pretty smart aliens, Jack. I do NOT want to run into THEM! WEre you in a Sci fi frame of mind lately? Good job with this.
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Date: 12/20/2011 4:47:00 PM
As long as I don't see flashing lights behind me while driving on the roads, I feel fine. The police around here are just itching to give out tickets. Good story with a bit of a sci-fi twist.
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Date: 12/20/2011 3:51:00 PM
Scary...Reads like a very scary alien film...Creative thoughts penned..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 12/20/2011 3:02:00 PM
great story and a very cool write!
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Date: 12/20/2011 2:27:00 PM
Great poem. Sic-fi! There is no one one can trust.
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Date: 12/20/2011 2:09:00 PM
Wow, that's quite the interesting write Jack!! I love the science-fiction/fantasy of the whole poem! You started us off with a normal scene that eventually brought death and an empty body! Then the same for his parents...What great imagery used also quite descriptive thus lending us great visions of the poem! Awesome Work!!
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